p.1 #2 · UCLA Law Commencement. My cousin graduated i took some pics...
why would you post the ones of backs of heads or with motion blur?
i like the photos generally, tho i think there are too many posted here.
as far as commentings on the photos themselves. im fairly sure thats a false vignette in #6, which is one of my most hated photo trends these days. use it sparingly.
p.1 #3 · UCLA Law Commencement. My cousin graduated i took some pics...
I'm sure she'll be very pleased. I agree with Tim that the vignette might be a little strong in a few of these, but I wouldn't avoid them entirely.
The first shot is my favorite. It's a great image, not for your cousin, bur for the man in the chair and his success despite his physical restrictions.
p.1 #4 · UCLA Law Commencement. My cousin graduated i took some pics...
Tim Nguyen wrote:
why would you post the ones of backs of heads or with motion blur?
i like the photos generally, tho i think there are too many posted here.
as far as commentings on the photos themselves. im fairly sure thats a false vignette in #6, which is one of my most hated photo trends these days. use it sparingly.
nice color, very punchy.
the one of teh back of peoples heads is to represent what a persons hardwork can accomplish. Despite a disability, this man fights all odds and now can stare up and look at his accomplishment.
the other one is motion blurred by like i said i like the emotion. but thats just me. i would never print it, and truly wish it was a crisp shot
i dunno i kinda like the vignetting, but do know what you mean, thank you so much in your response i am glad you liked some of them. ill look to do better next time .
p.1 #6 · UCLA Law Commencement. My cousin graduated i took some pics...
Your photos look good, nothing looks bad here. Experimentation is the best way to find out what you like, try everything. Consider not saying you will do better next time, as you haven't done bad this time.
