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Archive 2008 · #293: Retro Style

  
 
James Markus
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p.1 #1 · #293: Retro Style


I still like the first one, but will bow to the community opinion. Thanks for the comments! This one I imaged from the raw file...which should fix any color issues, and I cropped in a manner to eliminate the ribbon.

http://www.photomatter.com/_images/WebPosts/RetroStyle2.jpg

Edited by 1_of_9 on May 04, 2008 at 06:51 PM GMT

Edited on May 04, 2008 at 06:51 PM



May 03, 2008 at 11:15 PM
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p.1 #2 · #293: Retro Style


Very good pic but that scarf(?) which hides part of her right shoulder is very disturbing.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



May 04, 2008 at 07:22 AM
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p.1 #3 · #293: Retro Style


Yakim, That is a ribbon that hangs off the hat. Both the hat and dress are from the 1940's. They belonged to my mother.


May 04, 2008 at 08:05 AM
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p.1 #4 · #293: Retro Style


All I can say is that as the ribbon and the background are in the exact same colour, it may disturb some.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



May 04, 2008 at 08:09 AM
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p.1 #5 · #293: Retro Style


Well done, I only have one thing that bothers me is the color to the side of her face.

Norm



May 04, 2008 at 08:25 AM
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p.1 #6 · #293: Retro Style


Wow, what a shot. Very nice. The lighting is perfect. Great work!
-Nick



May 04, 2008 at 12:30 PM
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p.1 #7 · #293: Retro Style


Now you're talking. This is much better IMHO.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



May 04, 2008 at 03:26 PM
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p.1 #8 · #293: Retro Style


Yakim, I'm really confused now. I haven't changed anything...no edits...nothing. I assumed your monitor was showing the ribbon and background as the "same color", because you monitor isn't calibrated. On mine, there has always been a difference in luminosity between the two shades of dark gray/black.


May 04, 2008 at 03:35 PM
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p.1 #9 · #293: Retro Style


I think its the ribbon and the fact the right arm is cut off and the left is so prominent. On first view I actually thought the ribbon was her right hand with another glove on..

Lighting is perfect though, was this a studio shot?



May 04, 2008 at 04:04 PM
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p.1 #10 · #293: Retro Style


I like the look you're going for. The lipstick and the mole on her check are nice.


May 04, 2008 at 04:25 PM
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p.1 #11 · #293: Retro Style


The image has been re-done...C&C welcomed.


May 04, 2008 at 06:52 PM
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p.1 #12 · #293: Retro Style


Love it. Can I spy a slight "off black" top right of the hat? Finalist?


May 04, 2008 at 07:00 PM
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p.1 #13 · #293: Retro Style


Jim--I honestly preferred you first submission, but your photos are always top-notch, no matter what you post. Well done.--Frank


May 04, 2008 at 07:58 PM
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p.1 #14 · #293: Retro Style


Didn't see the first one, but I love the look of the fair skin against the rich clothing. Is that lighting, or a 40's styled cosmetic application? The red lipstick is the perfect accent.


May 05, 2008 at 01:58 AM
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p.1 #15 · #293: Retro Style


1_of_9 wrote:
Yakim, I'm really confused now. I haven't changed anything...no edits...nothing. I assumed your monitor was showing the ribbon and background as the "same color", because you monitor isn't calibrated. On mine, there has always been a difference in luminosity between the two shades of dark gray/black.


Now I am confused.
I looked at it yesterday morning (at work), hat and ribbon are almost invisible.
I looked at it yesterday evening (at home), hat and ribbon are clearly visible and very different from the background.
I looked at it today's morning (at work), hat and ribbon are clearly visible and very different from the background.



Happy shooting,
Yakim.






May 05, 2008 at 02:28 AM
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p.1 #16 · #293: Retro Style


It's evening. I'm at home. Hat and ribbon are clearly visible and very different from the background.

I don't understand it but I don't care. It's stil a lovely pic. A finalist IMHO.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.




May 05, 2008 at 02:51 PM
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p.1 #17 · #293: Retro Style


Lovely, Jim. Nice work.


May 05, 2008 at 04:47 PM
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p.1 #18 · #293: Retro Style


I like it. Nicely done.


May 05, 2008 at 05:54 PM
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p.1 #19 · #293: Retro Style


Love the drama of the colors the pale skin and the red lips, and that touch of mystery added by the hat hiding the eyes!


May 05, 2008 at 08:45 PM
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p.1 #20 · #293: Retro Style


I like this contrasty, bright color look a lot!


May 06, 2008 at 09:57 AM
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