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Tamara Lambert
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p.1 #1 · #290: End of Descent


This topic and a day over 40 degrees got me out of hibernation.

Comment and critique most appreciated. Thanks!



Edited by Tamara Lambert on Apr 15, 2008 at 07:10 AM GMT (Reason: tweak)






Edited on Apr 15, 2008 at 02:10 AM



Apr 14, 2008 at 11:11 PM
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p.1 #2 · #290: End of Descent


Hi Tamara,

Definitely a creepy run down place. I love the warm light at the base of the stairs. Very nice image. Good luck this week.

Steve S.



Apr 15, 2008 at 01:00 AM
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p.1 #3 · #290: End of Descent


Thanks very much for the comment Steve- the creepier the place the more I'm going to like it.


Apr 15, 2008 at 02:14 AM
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p.1 #4 · #290: End of Descent


Tamara, Lot's of angles and perspective to deal with, not to mention adding four more putting it all into a rectangle. I would have run like hell from this shot. Very well done. Something I need to work on. I like the tweak. It pulls me down to the heart of the subject now. A nice balance and I love the complimentary colors.


Apr 15, 2008 at 02:27 AM
Tamara Lambert
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p.1 #5 · #290: End of Descent


Thanks for your comments Mike. I'm glad you saw both of them; I was hoping the colors would shine more in this one. You all would've gotten a big laugh out of the position I was in at the top of the stairs to get the top corner of the door in view from under that second floor board. Hallways in houses that old are really narrow!


Apr 15, 2008 at 03:29 AM
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p.1 #6 · #290: End of Descent


Super composition...just enough of everything to give perspective. Good Job.

Hey, I see you have an Argus C3...that was my very first house brick...err camera. You can take some amazing shots those oldies...neat to see one still in use.



Apr 15, 2008 at 12:07 PM
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p.1 #7 · #290: End of Descent


Wow! Very nice shot. I love to try and shoot in these kind of places, but never have much luck with getting the light right. Great job!

Tom



Apr 15, 2008 at 12:17 PM
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p.1 #8 · #290: End of Descent


Nice color - and I really like the lighting! Nice job.


Apr 15, 2008 at 01:58 PM
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p.1 #9 · #290: End of Descent


Nicely done....have you tried this in B and W? Wonder what that would look like? Either way, nice shot.

Steve R



Apr 15, 2008 at 02:32 PM
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p.1 #10 · #290: End of Descent


See I love this, but then I also want to be drawn down towards the door. The door is wonderfully inviting, but my route their isn't clear and that's what I want from this shot. I want the steps down towards the inviting door. Amazing location. And splendid nonetheless.


Apr 15, 2008 at 04:39 PM
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p.1 #11 · #290: End of Descent


Love the feeling conveyed in this shot. Very depressed and mysterious. Perfect DoF, perspective and colors.

Great entry,
Chad



Apr 16, 2008 at 03:04 AM
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p.1 #12 · #290: End of Descent


Hi Tamara, I'd simply be repeating what everyone else said if I shared what I like about your image, so I won't. It's just a great photo with a lot of depth and emotional draw. Great job and good luck!

Dan



Apr 16, 2008 at 08:22 AM
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p.1 #13 · #290: End of Descent


Hi Tamara,
I think this is simply excellent. I love everything about it...all the angles, the colors, the
concept, the light, textures, the DOF.....everything. If this isn't in the finals, I've lost my 'gift' of being able to read Fred's mind.

Congratulations on having a great entry, either way.

Philly



Apr 16, 2008 at 02:25 PM
Tamara Lambert
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p.1 #14 · #290: End of Descent


1_of_9- Thank you very much for your comment! Of all the gear I've collected, the Brick is the one I carry around the most, heavy or not. I can't say I've been using film long enough to pick a favorite type, other than "expired" since I'm always practicing.

twee- Thanks for taking the time to comment! I love these old places. I visit one that was built of limestone, I'm waiting for the foliage to go shoot again.

Carrol- Thanks! I got out my ND and enhancing filters for this one.

Steven- Thanks! Actually, I'm going to go back out with my film gear to shoot this in black and white. Since I started shooting with film, I haven't been very happy with my black and white conversions. They look flat compared to film. I need practice, and I could clearly take a few pointers from you.

Flibble- Thanks very much for your thoughts. I think I'm bumping the limitations of my gear in this structure, I do have to say I wondered what a much wider lens would do the perspective. I'll have this in mind when I go back after it with film.

Chad- Thanks very much for your comments!

Dan- Thank you very much!






Apr 16, 2008 at 02:26 PM
Tamara Lambert
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p.1 #15 · #290: End of Descent


Thanks very much for commenting Philly! I love finding interesting things in otherwise ignored places.


Apr 16, 2008 at 02:36 PM





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