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J. Penland
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p.1 #1 · First e-shoot C&C please


So I shot my very first engagement sessions yesterday. I'm shooting their wedding July 19th, and I would like some C&C on what I have so far please I have a lot more images from this shoot that still need to go through.

We went to the Coker Arboretum on UNC-Chapel Hill's campus for the shoot. I had a great time shooting this e-session, and I think they even had some fun. They were starting to climb trees!

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Edited on Apr 14, 2008 at 10:27 AM



Apr 14, 2008 at 10:26 AM
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p.1 #2 · First e-shoot C&C please


My first reactions:
- decent poses, good use of DOF, decent composition
- the photos collectively are too cool from a color balance standpoint IMO (unless that was an explicit PP choice)
- #6 her face is lost in the shadows
- Several of them are a bit on the dark side and/or the black point was pushed too hard eliminating the mid-tones.
- the last one is the best one of the lot

Take my advice with a grain of salt, as I haven't done an e-session myself yet either

Edited on Apr 14, 2008 at 10:31 AM



Apr 14, 2008 at 10:30 AM
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p.1 #3 · First e-shoot C&C please


I think you are definately on the right track....

My humble opinion...

#3 - Could benefit from fill flash, as she is very dark. The bright background is distracting. Softbox off to the site would have been awesome!
#4 - He is lit better than her shot of the same pose, again background is distracting.
#6 - Fill flash needed again, her eyes are very dark.

#5 is my favorite. It might be your processing, but the faces look to be on the cool side.




Apr 14, 2008 at 10:43 AM
J. Penland
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p.1 #4 · First e-shoot C&C please


Thanks for the C&C Andrew and Todd!

Once I got home and started going through all the images I realized how much they could have benefited from some fill flash. *doh*

I also noticed know what I'm on a different computer the images do look a little cool, compared to when I was looking at them on my MBP. I'm pretty sure it's just from the processing, I will go back over it and see what I can fix.

Thanks again guys



Apr 14, 2008 at 12:01 PM
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p.1 #5 · First e-shoot C&C please


I like your images.
I want to add: Maybe some of your images should be cropped (2,3 and 8).



Apr 14, 2008 at 12:14 PM
J. Penland
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p.1 #6 · First e-shoot C&C please


Thanks JanWill

I'm going to go back over the pictures and do some different PP work and crop some.



Apr 15, 2008 at 08:24 AM





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