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p.1 #1 · 290 Frustrating End


A memory of how most of my games ended (of course I'm black).

C & C always appreciated!

larry

Edited by Young Image on Apr 13, 2008 at 11:58 PM GMT (Reason: Replace image)

Edited by Young Image on Apr 13, 2008 at 11:59 PM GMT (Reason: remove image)

Edited by Young Image on Apr 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM GMT (Reason: rework image)






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Apr 13, 2008 at 09:56 AM
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p.1 #2 · 290 Frustrating End


Love the idea, though the background disturbs me a little - has it been cloned out? I guess some of the highlights look a little blown, but maybe that adds to the stark nature of the image. Splendid nonetheless.


Apr 13, 2008 at 04:02 PM
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p.1 #3 · 290 Frustrating End


Thanks for comments. I tried to lighten a black background (and did so poorly). Back to black. Was concerned I lost detail of black pieces.


Apr 13, 2008 at 07:04 PM
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p.1 #4 · 290 Frustrating End


I agree with Flibble. Awesome idea though. well executed. I am still trying to learn that technique.

Steve R



Apr 13, 2008 at 10:44 PM
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p.1 #5 · 290 Frustrating End


Hi Larry,

I like the shot a lot. My son is a bit of a chess whiz. I used to be able to beat him, but I haven't won for over a year. I like the idea you are trying to capture here a lot. I do think the background is still a bit problematic. I see a halo around the rook that bothers me a bit. One other small nit, I would like to see the king in check, so perhaps you could reshoot and try to fix the background at the same time. I hope these suggestions help. I think this can be a very strong image. Good luck this week.

Steve S.



Apr 14, 2008 at 12:49 AM





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