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Archive 2008 · Reflections

  
 
Kaden K.
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p.1 #1 · Reflections


Fujifilm GA45ZI Pro, Kodak 100UC

From the Series "Icarus V":
http://www.pbase.com/dehl/v






Edited on Apr 09, 2008 at 02:01 PM



Apr 09, 2008 at 01:56 PM
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Interesting caputre. I like it.
As far as critical input, I suppose a similar capture, if it were possible, with less sky on the right and only the building behind might be better. But I like it as is.
Feels like a bit of Magritte.
Scott



Apr 10, 2008 at 09:49 PM
Kaden K.
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p.1 #3 · Reflections


Yes, a bit of the Magritte thingy.


Apr 10, 2008 at 10:10 PM
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Instantly thought Magritte too : )

I wouldn't mind the sky if the right side clothes did overlap the sky. If you had the ability to retake the photo, I think it would be an interesting composition more in thirds and straight on - the two figures on a close up building on the left 2/3, lower right a different building, upper right blue sky.

But I'm just thinking. As it is, beautiful and abstract



Apr 12, 2008 at 03:44 PM
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Thanks for the suggestions rykthia.


Apr 12, 2008 at 11:25 PM





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