Archive 2008 · Christy

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Hi to all,
It has been a while since I have posted, I would love your feedback on these images.

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Apr 07, 2008 at 12:44 AM

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p.1 #2 · Christy

I like the poses & most of the lighting, just would like to see a bit more light on her face...Nice model by the way

Apr 07, 2008 at 12:59 AM

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p.1 #3 · Christy

What is the intent of these images?

Is it to show off the clothes (fashion)?

Is it to show the makeup?

The hair?

The curtains?

Apr 07, 2008 at 09:11 AM

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p.1 #4 · Christy

Far too much PS makes her look like a plastic Barbie Doll. Sorry the whole thing does nothing for me.
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Apr 07, 2008 at 10:39 AM

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p.1 #5 · Christy

the eyes seem hidden to me.

Apr 07, 2008 at 04:12 PM

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p.1 #6 · Christy

Background is a bit distracting

Apr 07, 2008 at 04:13 PM

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p.1 #7 · Christy

Thank you all for your critique/comments

Apr 07, 2008 at 06:22 PM

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p.1 #8 · Christy

you are probably going for it but, looks too cold to me also the hair lost all the details but maybe thats just my monitor

Apr 07, 2008 at 06:30 PM

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p.1 #9 · Christy

would like these a bit more if you:

1. toned down the processing a bit-leave some texture in her skin

2. had moved her farther away from the curtains-it's not a particularly attractive pattern and does nothing to enhance your subject

3. had catchlights in the eyes-they're very dark and don't draw me in

sorry for the reviews-hope our critiques are useful to you

daniel

Apr 07, 2008 at 10:07 PM

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p.1 #10 · Christy

radioblurs wrote:
would like these a bit more if you:

1. toned down the processing a bit-leave some texture in her skin

2. had moved her farther away from the curtains-it's not a particularly attractive pattern and does nothing to enhance your subject

3. had catchlights in the eyes-they're very dark and don't draw me in

sorry for the reviews-hope our critiques are useful to you

daniel
Thank you for your CONSTUCTIVE tips.

I agree, my processing is a bit much, trying to work on this. I also agree that I could have had her farther away from the curtains, but I am working with very limited space. Yup, catchlights...they are missing!

Thank you for yor response.

Apr 08, 2008 at 11:46 AM


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