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Archive 2008 · "action"

  
 
iplayazi
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p.1 #1 · "action"


What do you guys think of this shot representing "Action" for my class in photography

normally I would think I would get a shot of maybe a bird in flight but our weather and time of the year is not good right now. It cant be a previous photo.

I used selective coloring to accentuate the reasoning for action.

http://www.pbase.com/iplayazi/image/94740766/original.jpg



Mar 26, 2008 at 02:07 PM
Ken Hernandez
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p.1 #2 · "action"


I really like the idea, but I think the face down cards take away too much of the attention on the subject (the hands in motion.) I think it would look better with more of the hands in the frame.

Just my $.02
Ken



Mar 26, 2008 at 02:54 PM
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p.1 #3 · "action"


I agree with Ken.
What about a pure BW?
Nice capture of the motion!
Scott G



Mar 26, 2008 at 07:48 PM
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p.1 #4 · "action"


I like the color idea but I think the face down card should be in black and white and possibly color the hands to focus more on the "action" part of the image. I totally missed the hands moving when I first glanced at it; my eyes were immediately drawn towards the bright red.


Mar 27, 2008 at 11:32 AM
Kaden K.
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p.1 #5 · "action"


Sweet imagery. The brighter color indeed gets the attention.


Mar 27, 2008 at 01:22 PM





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