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Archive 2008 · Josie (10 year old )

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p.1 #1 · Josie (10 year old )

I'm more of a looker and admirer on these boards but i want too learn more

C & C please.Thanks.

Mar 25, 2008 at 04:00 PM

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p.1 #2 · Josie (10 year old )

I'm also more of a looker. So with that said- I like it. Very nice. Very pretty young lady.

Sorry I can't give a "technical" ctitique as I don't know near enough to do so.

Gene

Mar 25, 2008 at 04:44 PM

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p.1 #3 · Josie (10 year old )

I love the composition and the pose....The WB is may be too blue... would have liked to see something a tad warmer ?

Mar 25, 2008 at 05:13 PM

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p.1 #4 · Josie (10 year old )

What a lovely subject to photograph.

I like the image.

I would crop a little off the top.

I would go even 'cooler' or blue too.

Lots of potential.

Mar 25, 2008 at 05:57 PM

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p.1 #5 · Josie (10 year old )

I like this too. It clear and whimsical.

I don't think I've ever used the term 'whimsical' before. I feel old.

Anyway, my point is that it's different and works. Sharp and clear lighting, nice separation of the subject. I'm sure someone will come in and find a dozen things that could be improved with it.

Mar 25, 2008 at 07:31 PM

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p.1 #6 · Josie (10 year old )

the crop is really cool. nice big open space, good work.

Mar 25, 2008 at 10:04 PM

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p.1 #7 · Josie (10 year old )

Nice shot. I like the composition and I don't have a problem with the crop. I'm sure it was what you wanted/intended. I like the blue, but I think it'd be nicer (my opinion here) if you kept the blue, but warmed up the skin-tone to a more natural hue.

kafene.

Mar 26, 2008 at 12:03 AM

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p.1 #8 · Josie (10 year old )

This picture really has a #D look that I love.
Might have cropped some off the top....but
great picture and model.

DA

Mar 26, 2008 at 11:57 AM

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p.1 #9 · Josie (10 year old )

This picture really has a 3D look that I love.
Might have cropped some off the top....but
great picture and model.

DA

Mar 26, 2008 at 11:58 AM

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p.1 #10 · Josie (10 year old )

beautiful girl. The crop is a bit detracting IMO

Mar 26, 2008 at 04:09 PM

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p.1 #11 · Josie (10 year old )

Thanks everyone , it's all helpful

Mar 26, 2008 at 04:22 PM


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