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engi
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p.1 #1 · Which of the three?

Hi all,

I'm trying to pick an entry for the current WA and need some collective help. The first one is my original entry (the book is on the sidewalk), and the other two are variations on a street scene. The light, unfortunately, was not cooperative, so I went with the B&W conversion. It also adds to the dramatism somewhat, IMHO.
So which of the three do you prefer? Thanks in advance!

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	http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2014/2340177576_9447f97514_o.jpg


	http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3089/2342746692_aed48cd272_o.jpg


	http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3063/2342746804_d974ea21be_o.jpg

Mar 18, 2008 at 01:09 AM

Bob Jarman
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p.1 #2 · Which of the three?

I like #2 but the subject (the person sitting?) is completely lost. #3 is way too busy. #1 doesn't interest me.

Good luck,

Bob

Mar 18, 2008 at 07:11 AM

Scott Stoness
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p.1 #3 · Which of the three?

For me it is a toss up between 1 and 2. 3 is too busy.

1 would be be better if it were untilted and cropped off the bottom to move the book from centre.

2 the man is obscured because of change in light and small size.

I think 1 by a nose for me.

Mar 18, 2008 at 08:13 AM

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p.1 #4 · Which of the three?

i love your first shot! It's much more interesting to look at then the other 2.

Mar 19, 2008 at 11:22 AM

engi
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p.1 #5 · Which of the three?

Thanks guys. I ended up keeping the first one.

Mar 19, 2008 at 09:35 PM


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