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p.1 #1 · Which one do you like

My teacher wants me to shoot a photo that is under the theme of "out of place."

I have shot these 2 tulips. What do you guys think? Which one should I hand in??

Thanks!

Todd

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http://www.pbase.com/iplayazi/image/94276355/original.jpg

Edited by iplayazi on Mar 16, 2008 at 09:05 PM GMT

Edited on Mar 16, 2008 at 04:05 PM

Mar 16, 2008 at 03:45 PM

Scott Stoness
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p.1 #2 · Which one do you like

I like 2nd best but it would be better with the right leaf in.

The reason I like it better is you are trying to contrast the snow with the flower and thus the whole flower and snow are needed. The first is more like a frame where you would not notice the background (more subtle).

Mar 16, 2008 at 03:49 PM

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p.1 #3 · Which one do you like

hi todd,

color and exposure is nice in both, but neither crop is really strong for me. i'm more drawn to the composition of #2, but distracted by the amputated leaf. PS it maybe?

Mar 16, 2008 at 03:53 PM

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p.1 #4 · Which one do you like

Look Better?

Thanks a bunch guys!

http://www.pbase.com/image/94282300/original.jpg

Mar 16, 2008 at 04:11 PM

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p.1 #5 · Which one do you like

You should've tried shooting from the bottom or at the flower's level. It would definitely look better

Mar 17, 2008 at 01:43 AM

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p.1 #6 · Which one do you like

I probably would have but my brown fence would have been in the picture

Mar 17, 2008 at 07:50 AM

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p.1 #7 · Which one do you like

The last one is much better for me with all the leaves. I think i would crop about 1/4 of the space above .

Mar 17, 2008 at 08:08 AM

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p.1 #8 · Which one do you like

Ill give that a whirl thanks Scott!

Mar 17, 2008 at 08:28 AM


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