Here is a tip. Don't post pictures in multiple posts if you want feedback. I know I look down to see where someone does not have feedback and provide feedback from there. If you post multiple I (and others) will assume you have already been helped.
1 nice colors - I don't like the sliver of post on left intruding - either in or out or look deliberate. Horizon should be 1/3 down or up - I would crop bottom below cars and above heavy shadow. I think I would have tried landscape on this one and left more empty space to right.
2 is an unique perspective. I think it needs more space below to get shadow all the way and either more or less ground pretruding. I like it. I would clone out sail boat that is framed though.
3 nice but soft and not well exposed. Use your histogram - make the historgram shift to right without blinking and clipping. Turn on your flash. Seems unlevel. You framed off the tip of the rock. I would crop a 1/2 of space between dog and side on right to improve.
4 Okay but if you did not tell me what it was I would not know what it was and that does not work for me.
5 is nice but needs photoshop work to get top darker and sharpening.
Scott Stoness wrote:
Here is a tip. Don't post pictures in multiple posts if you want feedback. I know I look down to see where someone does not have feedback and provide feedback from there. If you post multiple I (and others) will assume you have already been helped.
1 nice colors - I don't like the sliver of post on left intruding - either in or out or look deliberate. Horizon should be 1/3 down or up - I would crop bottom below cars and above heavy shadow. I think I would have tried landscape on this one and left more empty space to right.
2 is an unique perspective. I think it needs more space below to get shadow all the way and either more or less ground pretruding. I like it. I would clone out sail boat that is framed though.
3 nice but soft and not well exposed. Use your histogram - make the historgram shift to right without blinking and clipping. Turn on your flash. Seems unlevel. You framed off the tip of the rock. I would crop a 1/2 of space between dog and side on right to improve.
4 Okay but if you did not tell me what it was I would not know what it was and that does not work for me.
5 is nice but needs photoshop work to get top darker and sharpening.
Good photos.
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Thank you for your critiquing and for the tip! I will work on those things. #3 was rushed... I wanted to get the shot in before I lost it. Great tips! Thank you!!I probably should not have posted #4 on this forum ... I just thought it looked cool...
