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nick bellotto
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p.1 #1 · night run


Hi, any C&C is highly appreciated as usual!










Mar 11, 2008 at 04:49 AM
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p.1 #2 · night run


The lines are nice leading in both direction down the street. The motion could either be less or more but it is okay. The biggest thins I don't like in this picture is the bright light top left(stepping modestly left might have removed) and the fact that it is dark in the front and bright in the back. It is not clear what the subject is. It is a little soft too.

Perhaps darkening in photoshop down the middle would improve.



Mar 11, 2008 at 10:48 PM
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p.1 #3 · night run


Oh boy, Nick, I know exactly where this picture is taken. Lived there for a few years. My, this brings memories back! And your photo exactly captures what's going on. Taxis buzzing along at every single minute of day and night. That bright yellow artificial light keeping the street well lit. Looking at the photo I can actually smell the street.

The bright light that bothers Scott is not a problem for me at all. Where I would go along with him is that you might want to consider cutting off the all shadowy part of the shutters on the far left of the picture.

Thanks for sharing. Looking at your pic, I am getting all nostalgic.

Cheers,
Jörg



Mar 12, 2008 at 03:04 PM
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p.1 #4 · night run


Dear scott and Herr thanks for your comment!

Herr, here everything is still the same and Hollywood Road is now my home.

Hope to see you here if you come back.

ciao




Mar 12, 2008 at 09:02 PM





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