This girl is absolutly gorgeous!!!!! Nice (fun) shots. Lighting is pretty good. The one thing that I am not a fan of is the reflections of the umbrella reflection in her sunglasses. Other than that, very nice. Did I mention that she is gorgeous?!
I'll second the gorgeous comment. I don't really care for most of the shots where she's acting crazy, but it certainly appears as though she was enjoying the session.
I think 4,6,7 and 12 are very nice shots. Of all of them I think 12 is the best.
They really are fun shots, and a gorgeous model. What I like is that you didn't sacrifice lighting or exposure just to get the oddball poses. They look like the best of any advertising shots. Most of them.
The model is so beautiful it's hard to evaluate the image quality and composition which, by the way are excellent, as usual. She reminds me a lot of Daliah Lavi.
Very nice and looks like fun. Some of the texture of your backgrounds does show, although only a bit. Maybe that's what you wanted (like last time ). To fix, move her farther away from the background or change aperture. Always good to see your latest photos.
Jim Rickards wrote:
Very nice and looks like fun. Some of the texture of your backgrounds does show, although only a bit. Maybe that's what you wanted (like last time ). To fix, move her farther away from the background or change aperture. Always good to see your latest photos.
+1
My nit to pick is the same.... the variations/wrinkles in the surface texture of your seamless are very distracting. Beyond that, I'm a big fan!
love the contrast of the hot pink against her black dress and dark features. i'm a fan of 2, 4 (though i'd lose the sunglasses) & 13.
5 looks particularly uncomfortable and unnatural.
the consistent distraction for me is the fly-away hair! some quick softening and clean-up in photoshop would elevate these from some nice shots of a pretty girl to some real ad caliber images.
#3 is hillarious. My fave. 4 and 12 are also quite good, in a more conventional way. I also like 13.
If you have the space where you shoot, try moving he model off the background a few feet. Maybe also consider lighting the background and model separately, and use DOF to blur the background and get rid of those wrinkles.
