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Edited by kevinsullivan on Mar 02, 2008 at 04:29 PM GMT

Edited by kevinsullivan on Mar 02, 2008 at 04:29 PM GMT






Edited on Mar 02, 2008 at 04:29 PM



Mar 02, 2008 at 02:54 PM
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p.1 #2 · #284: Kinda Sappy


Wonderful concept and well executed, Kevin! I love the title, too. Very clever! My only critique might be that the stem of the glass gets lost at the bottom. Maybe it's better on your monitor at home where it's larger but in the smaller version I can't make it out from the background. Perhaps it the glass and the bottle were sitting on someting it might give them a little more context. (?) Either way, I really like the shot and that is one amazing bottle of designer syrup. Must be expensive.

All the best,

Endre

Oh - one other thing: You have a glass full of syrup but the bottle is still full. A little strange.

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Mar 02, 2008 at 04:00 PM
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p.1 #3 · #284: Kinda Sappy


the picture exhibits vignetting. Is this purposeful? Also, the top of the photo looks a bit dark. This may be on purpose i do not know. I like the concept though.


Mar 02, 2008 at 04:05 PM
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p.1 #4 · #284: Kinda Sappy


Endra, Thanks a lot. That means a lot coming from you. I'll see if I can burn in the bottom of the glass. Oh, and, yes, there is that inconsistency: full glass, sealed bottle. My wife told me not to open the bottle -- it's part of our "future gift" collection. So I had to fill up the glass from the plastic jug in the fridge!


Mar 02, 2008 at 04:09 PM
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p.1 #5 · #284: Kinda Sappy


the picture exhibits vignetting. Is this purposeful?

Yes, it was. That's not to say that it worked!



Mar 02, 2008 at 09:32 PM
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p.1 #6 · #284: Kinda Sappy


it sort of does, but in the top left hand corner there is a very dark spot. If you can, i would lighten that up a bit. Also, if it isnt too muich trouble, i would open the bottle, spill some on the table and shoot it while some syrup is pouring out, with the glass right next to it. My 2cents.


Mar 02, 2008 at 10:47 PM
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p.1 #7 · #284: Kinda Sappy


Very crisp picture, I love the colors.. I like the vignetting as well, I think it really adds to the image. Mind if I ask what you used for lighting?



Mar 03, 2008 at 11:19 AM
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p.1 #8 · #284: Kinda Sappy


Mind if I ask what you used for lighting?

Thank you for your kind comments. This is actually my first-ever set-up shot. I'm usually just a boring point and shoot person, albeit with equipment that I don't deserve to own. For the shot here I placed the items on a floppy piece of white card-board, under a cabinet with two doors. I opened the two doors and clipped portable incandescent lights -- you know the clip-on kind with aluminum hoods -- to the bottom of each door. I used some white plastic cutting boards to block most of the direct rays from hitting the bottles while letting some diffuse light (although not much) filter through. The challenge was to get enough light on the label. I moved the cutting boards around until I had gotten rid of the most onerous specular highlights on the glass. That's it. Pretty primitive. It looked like a project by my 7 year old!



Mar 03, 2008 at 09:31 PM
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p.1 #9 · #284: Kinda Sappy


Really neat image, Kevin. The colors and simplicity works; very striking.


Mar 03, 2008 at 10:22 PM
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p.1 #10 · #284: Kinda Sappy


A great lighting job makes this shot work very well. Tack sharp and well framed. Great concept, very elegant.

Good luck,
Chad



Mar 04, 2008 at 12:04 AM
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p.1 #11 · #284: Kinda Sappy


Nicely done Kevin!


Mar 04, 2008 at 11:59 AM
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p.1 #12 · #284: Kinda Sappy


Kevin,
Very nice shot!
My only suggestion would be to light it so as not to lose the stem and bottom of the glass.
Good luck!
~ Carrol



Mar 04, 2008 at 12:02 PM
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p.1 #13 · #284: Kinda Sappy


Most have been said. I think its nicely done.

Steve R



Mar 04, 2008 at 03:33 PM
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p.1 #14 · #284: Kinda Sappy


Kevin,

Very nicely done. I have been working to overcome some issue I have with taking shots of glass and your shot here is a good example for me. Great idea and well executed. Thanks for sharing.

Karen



Mar 06, 2008 at 07:18 PM





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