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Entry change.
(Thank you Karen and Steve, for your comments on my former shot. I was having trouble visualizing a better abstract, and came up with this instead. Hopefully it's better! )

http://i.pbase.com/o6/46/667946/1/93442305.BeQXStT0.Tipsysmallwithcup.jpg

Comments and critiques always welcome.

Jason

Edited by Jazno on Feb 26, 2008 at 01:21 AM GMT (Reason: Minor Tweak)

Edited by Jazno on Feb 26, 2008 at 12:19 PM GMT (Reason: Added Glass. Better?)

Edited on Feb 26, 2008 at 02:19 PM



Feb 26, 2008 at 01:18 AM
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p.1 #2 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


Wow Jason, your creativity never ceases to amaze me! Did you warp the table and bottle with image distortion? Great out of focus of everything. I wonder if a glass near-by would be too predictable? Great job as usual!

Jamie



Feb 26, 2008 at 02:04 AM
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p.1 #3 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


Now that's drunk. In fact in wondering how you got a digital photo sensor placed inside your optical nerve Very realistic

Great and creative entry,
Chad



Feb 26, 2008 at 02:43 AM
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contre-jour wrote:
Wow Jason, your creativity never ceases to amaze me! Did you warp the table and bottle with image distortion? Great out of focus of everything. I wonder if a glass near-by would be too predictable? Great job as usual!

Jamie


Thank you Jamie, yes I warped this using a mix of "wave" and "spherize" as well as putting just a touch of undistorted original back in, for a ghosted effect.
I hadn't thought of a glass, that could work. I was going to break the bottle, but didn't want to have to clean it up.

Jason



Feb 26, 2008 at 02:49 AM
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p.1 #5 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


Chad Schulz wrote:
Now that's drunk. In fact in wondering how you got a digital photo sensor placed inside your optical nerve Very realistic

Great and creative entry,
Chad


Thanks Chad. I wasn't sure how accurate this actually was, being a non-drinker myself. Glad you like it!



Feb 26, 2008 at 02:50 AM
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p.1 #6 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


this is to funny. I was going to do EXACTLY the same thing as a replacement to my original. I mean exactly. You saw right through my head but of course it was the matter of setting it up and I didn't make it that far. I think you did great with it. The only difference is that I saw it a little closer behind white with a few more bottles blurred for the DOF.

Steve R.



Feb 26, 2008 at 04:51 AM
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p.1 #7 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


Well done, captures the mood well.


Feb 26, 2008 at 09:30 AM
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p.1 #8 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


Reminds me of the other night, I just couldn't see this clearly...


Feb 26, 2008 at 11:19 AM
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p.1 #9 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


Jason,
This is a much stronger image. The warped treatment adds so much!
I agree w/Jamie that a glass nearby (that you are missing when you pour) would seem to make a bit more sense.
good luck!
Carrol



Feb 26, 2008 at 11:29 AM
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p.1 #10 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


Steven Roberts wrote:
this is to funny. I was going to do EXACTLY the same thing as a replacement to my original. I mean exactly. You saw right through my head but of course it was the matter of setting it up and I didn't make it that far. I think you did great with it. The only difference is that I saw it a little closer behind white with a few more bottles blurred for the DOF.

Steve R.


Seems great minds do think alike!
Sorry to steal your idea. (telepathy is great except for when used for evil.)

Thanks Steve.

Jason

Edited on Feb 26, 2008 at 12:13 PM



Feb 26, 2008 at 12:12 PM
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p.1 #11 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


TimothyAllen wrote:
Well done, captures the mood well.


Much obliged Timothy!





Feb 26, 2008 at 12:13 PM
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p.1 #12 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


ruuskan wrote:
Reminds me of the other night, I just couldn't see this clearly...


I hope you're referring to the needle threading escapade...
Thanks Jouko.




Feb 26, 2008 at 12:14 PM
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p.1 #13 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


This is a great image, reminds me of my old army days.. lol


Feb 26, 2008 at 12:15 PM
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p.1 #14 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


Carrol wrote:
Jason,
This is a much stronger image. The warped treatment adds so much!
I agree w/Jamie that a glass nearby (that you are missing when you pour) would seem to make a bit more sense.
good luck!
Carrol


Thanks Carrol. The original idea was to show one passing out on the floor, where a glass wouldn't normally be, but if it seems more like just a counter-top I may need to make some adjustments. I'll try adding a glass to the shot, thanks.

Jason

Edited on Feb 26, 2008 at 12:19 PM



Feb 26, 2008 at 12:19 PM
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p.1 #15 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


HighlanderMac wrote:
This is a great image, reminds me of my old army days.. lol


Thank you Mac, apreciate it!



Feb 26, 2008 at 12:20 PM
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p.1 #16 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


Clever and well-executed as we have come to expect. Thea


Feb 26, 2008 at 07:37 PM
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p.1 #17 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


Thea Kirkwood wrote:
Clever and well-executed as we have come to expect. Thea


Thanks Thea, much appreciated!

Jason


Edited on Feb 26, 2008 at 07:58 PM



Feb 26, 2008 at 07:58 PM
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p.1 #18 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


I too thought about 'drunk' photos, but you nailed it
Nice composition
Peter



Feb 26, 2008 at 11:26 PM
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p.1 #19 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


Thanks for stopping by Peter, glad you like it.


Feb 26, 2008 at 11:36 PM
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p.1 #20 · #283: Too Much To Drink.


Nice work, Jason! This whole topic was a drag as far as I was concerned, so you really managed to hit this difficult one on the nose. Good work!

all the best,

Endre



Feb 28, 2008 at 04:20 PM
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