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Dergiman
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p.1 #1 · web site critique


hi folks,

i have built together a web page for presenting myself in the net (i am a photo student). i dīlike to know what you like and what you donīt like about it. all comments are welcome. btw this is my first page ever!

http://www.philippderganz.com


felipe



Feb 19, 2008 at 01:40 PM
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p.1 #2 · web site critique


The design is ok, but I don't really care for the pictures you have on the home page. They don't really make me want to look much further.

The pictures in the gallery load very slowly. I am on the road and using hotel wireless and it took more than 30 second to change images.



Feb 19, 2008 at 09:52 PM
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p.1 #3 · web site critique


good design -- what flash program are you using? one gripe i have is the titles. you have one called 'stills' when in fact all of the images are stills. needs better categorization.


Feb 19, 2008 at 11:03 PM
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p.1 #4 · web site critique


I think that you've done an excellent job. It is clean and easy to navigate. Best yet is that it fits on my screen as a single page, none of that annoying, unnecessary scrolling to see more. Screen load wasn't too bad considering it's flash galleries.


Feb 19, 2008 at 11:15 PM
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p.1 #5 · web site critique


thanks for your comments.


Feb 20, 2008 at 10:04 AM
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p.1 #6 · web site critique


I like it. Clean design & easy to navigate but the images take a long time to load (for me anyway).


Feb 20, 2008 at 10:16 AM
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p.1 #7 · web site critique


Nice work and congratulations on the contest win. I like your site.

Sharon



Feb 20, 2008 at 10:18 AM
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p.1 #8 · web site critique


Too tall on my 1024 x 768 screen unfortunately, have to scroll down to see the bottom of the image and the navigation...


Feb 21, 2008 at 12:09 PM
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p.1 #9 · web site critique


If you visit the news page, navigation links become very dark--almost unreadable. Might want to check for some erroneous CSS.


Feb 27, 2008 at 04:41 PM
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p.1 #10 · web site critique


Looks nice! Too slow for me, though. I really think you need to get someones attention in seconds or they're likely to move on. Then you have to keep it!!

Cheers,
Hugh



Mar 03, 2008 at 03:02 PM
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p.1 #11 · web site critique


I like the pictures!!! They are modern and young in style! Definitely you have a differentiation.

Now for the website:
1. Loading is SLOW man! (and I browse through a lot of phtographers' websites). Your JPEGs too large? Try to stay below 150Kb. (I use 150Kb max, and flash, as well as content management, and loading is breezy.) Use Photoshop's "Save for Web" function. It's very2 good. Depending on the photograph, I use anywhere from 65% (for simpler photos) to 80% (for detail heavy photos) quality.
If the JPEG is already below 150Kb, then try to find a faster hosting.

2. The main picture -- the guy in close up -- is a love it or hate it picture. I suggest try something that's still cool, but more "mainstream", so that Art Buyers won't close the browser at the first sight.

Great portfolio, btw. Full of potential.

Edited on Mar 04, 2008 at 11:19 AM



Mar 04, 2008 at 11:17 AM





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