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Archive 2008 · first moonrise - scotland, lots to learn here

  
 
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p.1 #1 · first moonrise - scotland, lots to learn here


Just another photo I say while putting my son to bed - ran down grabbed the camera, this one taken hand held as could not risk waking him up - Nikon D40 again.







Feb 11, 2008 at 03:33 PM
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p.1 #2 · first moonrise - scotland, lots to learn here


#2 intersting landscape over same loch in scotland







Feb 11, 2008 at 03:34 PM
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p.1 #3 · first moonrise - scotland, lots to learn here


#3 my son again before he lept off the bed







Feb 11, 2008 at 03:35 PM
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p.1 #4 · first moonrise - scotland, lots to learn here


#4 both the boys having a rest on the beach







Feb 11, 2008 at 03:36 PM
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p.1 #5 · first moonrise - scotland, lots to learn here


anything you can add to the photo's composition settings etc it much appreciated....



Feb 11, 2008 at 05:31 PM
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p.1 #6 · first moonrise - scotland, lots to learn here


First for good feedback I would limit posts to 3 with similar theme - I would not mix portrait with landscape. You want to make it easy ( the reader does not have to pick) to choose what to comment on. Second I would make it easy by specifying the exif data so we don't have to download and check.

1 is good (my favorite picture of the bunch) but would be better if the sun was not dead centre. Rule of thumb is to have the horizon at 1/3 or 2/3 you have it close to 50/50. It is good but a bit square.

2 is nice but needs a circular polarizer and a nd grad to lower the exposure in the sky and remove the glare in the water. Very nice rich foreground though. Worth reshooting with some filters

3 should be closer in with eyes looking at the camera and a less distracting background. Try again - babies are easy because they don't object.

4 I think it needs their faces and eyes if possible.

You have some good material. Hope this helps.



Edited on Feb 12, 2008 at 12:23 AM



Feb 12, 2008 at 12:22 AM





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