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p.1 #1 · prepare for landing


This is one of my first approaches to macro world.
would really like t receive some C&C!
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Feb 09, 2008 at 02:46 AM
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p.1 #2 · prepare for landing


I'm afraid that the focus is poor and the exposure is too high. Even at 1/500 sec the flowers are not sharp and that suggests a missed focus rather than camera motion. Another probable cause is lack of DOF despite shooting at f/9 - that's what happens when you shoot up close. The histogram indicates too much exposure, and in general youshould be aware that reds can overexpose quite easily.

1/500 should be more than adequate for the flowers but you'd probably want faster to keep the bee nice and sharp.

With those issues fixed I think I would have liked this photo.

- Alan



Feb 09, 2008 at 06:06 AM
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p.1 #3 · prepare for landing


I think Alan is spot on. Also, try a vertical crop to remove the rightmost flower and I'd probably darken the background.

Even using a tripod, I've found the slightest breeze can be a problem when shooting extreme close ups - don't know if you were using VR or not but I've read (don't have any VR lenses - yet ) it, IIRC, does not compensate for moving subjects, either.

regards,

Bob

Edited on Feb 09, 2008 at 07:23 AM



Feb 09, 2008 at 07:23 AM
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p.1 #4 · prepare for landing


thanks to both of you for the very precious comments!
will try to work on your suggestions.




Feb 09, 2008 at 10:04 AM
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p.1 #5 · prepare for landing


Closer on bee would be better. For the been to be interesting I think you have to have it larger in the frame.







Feb 09, 2008 at 07:07 PM
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p.1 #6 · prepare for landing


thank scott, I always appreciate your comments and suggestions!


Feb 10, 2008 at 06:48 AM





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