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Archive 2008 · One day I'll set sail

  
 
MaximusW
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p.1 #1 · One day I'll set sail


Got this little pic when I caught my son making a run for it on a pier. Any ideas on improvement,







Feb 08, 2008 at 05:39 PM
Scott Stoness
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p.1 #2 · One day I'll set sail


I think it would be better if it were a little lower perspective so it does not look like you are looking down on him. A bit more bottom below and fence to the side would provide more context. And a little less centred would improve as well.

Obviously if you could jump in the lake and get his face it would capture the emotion but many that's going to far



Feb 08, 2008 at 09:05 PM
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p.1 #3 · One day I'll set sail


I agree with Scott's suggestions, except I wouldn't show the boys face and I personally think a centered crop would work well here. But I also think that it looks a bit overexposed. Maybe move the levels slider around a bit for a more pleasing look. Other than that, I think this is a pretty effective image.


Feb 09, 2008 at 02:41 AM
MaximusW
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p.1 #4 · One day I'll set sail


Thanks guys, thats really helpful, as I said before i'm new and studying so all this feedback should make the difference...


Feb 09, 2008 at 03:58 AM





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