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Archive 2008 · Arch. Interior series *comments needed*

  
 
Kevin Sherman
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p.1 #1 · Arch. Interior series *comments needed*


Hey all!

Over the last few weeks I have been running through my images from an interior shoot a did and wanted to run them through you all. This is not quite the full set, I am going back out there to reshoot the conference room because a) they are replacing the doors and b) I don't like the images I have of the conference room mostly because my lens wasn't wide enough (I have since picked up a Sigma 12-24mm).

There are 12 images, easiest for me is to link to the gallery I set up, but you all really want me to, I can post them to here.

MPS Loria

Thanks for looking, and thanks especially to those who dish out the critiques, I need 'em

- KS

Edited on Feb 01, 2008 at 06:04 PM



Feb 01, 2008 at 06:04 PM
Scott Stoness
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p.1 #2 · Arch. Interior series *comments needed*


The pictures are very nice. Well focussed and exposed. So the following is being very fussy.


7/12 feels like it needs the bottom of the chairs

10/12 might be better with less perceived tilt

4/12 has just the edge of the chair on right that coudl be framed out.

11/12 I would have tucked in the garbage before shooting

Good job on series



Feb 01, 2008 at 10:40 PM
Kevin Sherman
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p.1 #3 · Arch. Interior series *comments needed*


Thanks Scott!

in #7, I think I do have some chair left, so I will throw it in.
#10 is in the conference room and I am actually going to re-shoot it. It looks funny because I used the lens distortion correction to make it look like a head-on shot, which I am going to do when I go back out there.
#4, good eye! Its on my list...
#11, I thought the same exact thing, but I don't think its worth the effort to reshoot/rework.

Thanks again for the comments! The more I go through them, the more I realize that I am pretty happy with the series too!

-KS



Feb 02, 2008 at 03:01 AM





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