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Archive 2008 · C&C needed

  
 
Gabriel C
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p.1 #1 · C&C needed


Hello, i would love some c&c on this photo! Have no mercy, please!

chains



Jan 31, 2008 at 04:15 AM
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p.1 #2 · C&C needed


Nice if it's your first picture in your life. I mean, anyone is capable of taking such a picture and there is nothing to it. Sorry

So, Gabriel, if you at least got rid of that nasty black something in the lower left corner, it would indicate it's not that accidental. Anyway, it's nice if you want to use it for some kind of web design. Colors are good, contrast is fine too, an the bokeh is perfect, so in the technical sense, it's pretty good.



Jan 31, 2008 at 08:10 AM
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p.1 #3 · C&C needed


The framing is pretty good with the links at 1/3 right and blurred behind. The focus is pretty good on the links. I think the picture does not have a strong subject because the ice particles on the chain are not big enough leaving competition between background (which is blurred) and foreground.

As suggested, the dark left item should be cropped out.

I think to improve in reshooting:
Choose a link that is full to you as the centre point rather than twisted
Make the shot closer in so that the ice particles are more noticable on the chain
Lower the perspecive to get more of the trees behind
Remove the dark item on left
try some fill flash



Jan 31, 2008 at 09:04 AM





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