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Andres Bonilla
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p.1 #1 · Orange fun

I continue with my experiment to see i f I can do a car graphic style. I would appreciate any suggestions.

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Andres

Nov 15, 2007 at 11:19 PM

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p.1 #2 · Orange fun

Andres, I think the car looks amazing-really beautiful, but something about the reflection bothers me. Maybe try toning it down so it doesn't compete with the car, or even try a shadow instead. Like I said, the car part is great. Jon.

Nov 16, 2007 at 10:27 AM

Andres Bonilla
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p.1 #3 · Orange fun

Thanks! the reflection was a chore, I was not sure how much reflection to have; I even thought to shear it or make it less defined.

Thanks,

Andres

Nov 16, 2007 at 11:29 AM

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p.1 #4 · Orange fun

The reflection should be vertical - not at an angle, as you have it.

Hope this helps.

Nov 16, 2007 at 03:36 PM

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p.1 #5 · Orange fun

Thanks Mike, it was also pointed out that the reflection should fade from the tires. Thanks

Nov 16, 2007 at 10:50 PM

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p.1 #6 · Orange fun

Actually, the reflection is completely wrong. Where's the reflection of the undercarriage of the car? Where's the shadow under the car.... it looks like you took a side view of the car and pasted it down next to it, but that's not consistent with how it should be. That's why it seems off; the angle is wrong, critical elements are missing, and there's no shadow.

Hate to be harsh, but it's back to the drawing board on this one.

Arka C.

Nov 16, 2007 at 11:43 PM


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