Philly Rains 
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Bill, I love the story of your grapes! The visuals you evoked were lovely! Good sharpness, and dof, and the colors are glorious.
I hope you don't mind if I make a couple of suggestions about your image, because the subject is excellent. I offer all this in the spirit of education, and support, shown to me when I was new to FM. 
I think it could be improved if you isolate one bunch of grapes, and try shooting them against a contrasting background, rather than more greenery. The busy 'green' in the background is confusing to the eye.
Since these are on a route you can easily take again before the deadline, you might also take along a spray bottle of water for removing dirt, or specks of whatever, on the fruit which are distracting. You'd still have water droplets, too.
One more little thing...if you choose to stay with this image, the tiny bit of red in the middle left draws one away from your primary focus, so I'd clone it out.
As one of our members said recently, (and I'd give him credit, if I could remember who,) "Free advice is worth exactly what you pay for it," so please take what I've said with a shaker of salt.  It's only one person's opinion....and we all know what they say about opinions. 
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