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p.1 #1 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway



My first submission at this site, please leave any critique, I'd rather hear it and have my feelings hurt.




http://bgreenphotos.net/images/b&w3a.jpg






Oct 10, 2003 at 12:55 AM
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p.1 #2 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway


Nice strong lighting and lines. The curves really add to the image and the straight lines pull your eye right in.


Oct 10, 2003 at 08:53 AM
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p.1 #3 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway


Very nice job with this shot. You wanted critiques, I would try and remove the trash can if possible. It breaks the lines on the left hand side and is a nusicence to my eye for this photo. Maybe a crop would help or maybe some PS work. But like I said, it is a great photo.


Oct 10, 2003 at 09:47 AM
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p.1 #4 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway


love it.......


Oct 10, 2003 at 05:38 PM
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p.1 #5 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway


Striking high contrast, great compo. Well seen, well done.


Oct 11, 2003 at 03:20 AM
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p.1 #6 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway


Brian - love this shot. I think b/w lends itself so well to strong contrasts. Your picture certainly fills the bill. Love the geometric movement.

Pam



Oct 11, 2003 at 04:24 PM
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p.1 #7 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway


I like the contrasting lines – nicely done!


Oct 12, 2003 at 01:56 PM
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p.1 #8 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway


Love it Brian! Great use of high contrast and interesting to boot!

Cheers
Sheila



Oct 12, 2003 at 09:20 PM
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p.1 #9 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway


Very nice shot. Love the lines and the contrasts!


Oct 12, 2003 at 09:22 PM
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p.1 #10 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway


Very nice, I do agree with the comment about the trash can, but this is a shot that I wish I could have taken.

Welcome to the site.... it's a lot of fun! Can't wait to see more shots



Oct 12, 2003 at 09:37 PM
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p.1 #11 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway


Thanks all so much for the comments. I also appreciate the critique (Totem), and I do agree - that was my biggest disappointment with the photo. I have been long responding to the replies due to a weekend trip to Las Vegas - where I think I got a few shots to use for our monthly assignment!


Oct 13, 2003 at 01:09 AM
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p.1 #12 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway


welcome to to the forum brian!

great first submission...i love the shot...and the play of the light and shadows...

i agree with totem, too...although it isn't a major distraction, the trash can in the middle third of the picture break up the shot a little...

well done!

good luck...

bob



Oct 13, 2003 at 07:56 PM
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p.1 #13 · #83 - Shadows on Walkway


i'm pretty sure that you'll make the finalists' for the contest. its a great shot.

z



Oct 13, 2003 at 09:39 PM





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