... The composition would probably benefit greatly from you being lower ...
... If you can i would try it again, with a diffuser on the flash ...
Thanks for the comments.
I was crouched with one knee on the ground and I had a diffuser on the flash. So, at least I had that much right The shot was taken with a 70-200, I would have to check to see what focal length it was at for this shot. Comfirmations are a once-in-a-lifetime event. The anointing portion (i.e. what is pictured) takes about 3 seconds, so there's not much time.
I'm catholic, and I know why you took the photo. I'd love to have taken a similar one of my sons when they had their confirmation.
There is nothing significant about a nude woman, or any photo that's posted in this forum.... it is the photographer and the viewer that gives it significance, based on their beliefs, preferences, and profession (some are wedding photographers, some are fashion photographers, and some just prefer to photograph the moment as it happens).
I'm catholic, and I know why you took the photo. I'd love to have taken a similar one of my sons when they had their confirmation.
Thank you, that's the best compliment anyone could give!
There is nothing significant about a nude woman, or any photo that's posted in this forum.... it is the photographer and the viewer that gives it significance, based on their beliefs, preferences, and profession (some are wedding photographers, some are fashion photographers, and some just prefer to photograph the moment as it happens).
I share your view on things. I'm beginning to realize how much "audience" and the subject matter have to mesh. Most good photographs have basic elements in common, but then again, if people can't relate to the subject matter or if they do not understand the context, the picture has minimal impact. That said, I have recieved some great feedback that will make me think about shots I take in the future.
It's an average looking snapshot. You absolutely love it because you can relate to it. It happens all the time.
Here's a question, would you blow this picture up to a poster sized 24"x36" print and hang it over your fireplace (or anywhere in the house for that matter) or would you put it in a really nice 4x6 frame on the mantle? And why?
The shot was taken with a 70-200, I would have to check to see what focal length it was at for this shot. Comfirmations are a once-in-a-lifetime event. The anointing portion (i.e. what is pictured) takes about 3 seconds, so there's not much time. 
Thanks Cari, I can't spell to save my life!