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DanielScott wrote:
Great work Derek. For my own taste I might remove the trash around her though. It's just not connecting to her attitude or look to me, so I personally can't see a reason for the garbage to be in the shot. I also wish there was some separation between her hair and the background as well. Perhaps having set up a reflector behind her out of frame to camera right would have remedied this, or some adjustments to the editing might remedy it as well. As it is, her hair bleeds into the background and loses it's shape just a bit too much for my liking. ...Show more →
Daniel, thank you much for your insight. Before printing the first image (the only one I’ll print) I will certainly remove the trash, and will try adding some separation between background and hair.
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