Archive 2022 · Young Bride
p.1 #4Young Bride
A beautiful woman and bride. A very nice composition. My only nit is that darn air grate on the floor.
That could be eliminated but it is your composition and it is wonderful regardless John!
Dan
That could be eliminated but it is your composition and it is wonderful regardless John!
Dan
Apr 16, 2022 at 09:40 AM
p.1 #5Young Bride
Danpbphoto wrote:
A beautiful woman and bride. A very nice composition. My only nit is that darn air grate on the floor.
That could be eliminated but it is your composition and it is wonderful regardless John!
Dan
Thanks Dan you're right. For me, it was just part of the character of the scene and the older home's ambience. But, studying it a bit more it does distract from the symmetry.
A beautiful woman and bride. A very nice composition. My only nit is that darn air grate on the floor.
That could be eliminated but it is your composition and it is wonderful regardless John!
Dan
Thanks Dan you're right. For me, it was just part of the character of the scene and the older home's ambience. But, studying it a bit more it does distract from the symmetry.
Apr 16, 2022 at 12:33 PM
p.1 #6Young Bride
johnld wrote:
That could be eliminated but it is your composition and it is wonderful regardless John!
DanThanks Dan you're right. For me, it was just part of the character of the scene and the older home's ambience. But, studying it a bit more it does distract from the symmetry.
I agree with you also John! It was the scene encompassing the bride on a beautiful curved stair rail. Just sort of looked out of place. Drew my eye away from her happiness. Just me!
Dan
Danpbphoto wrote
A beautiful woman and bride. A very nice composition. My only nit is that darn air grate on the floor.That could be eliminated but it is your composition and it is wonderful regardless John!
Dan
I agree with you also John! It was the scene encompassing the bride on a beautiful curved stair rail. Just sort of looked out of place. Drew my eye away from her happiness. Just me!
Dan
Apr 16, 2022 at 01:58 PM
p.1 #7Young Bride
Beautifully captured, John. I agree with Dan's assessment of the air grate. If you use photoshop, have you tried selecting it and using content aware fill? That tends to make easy work of this sort of editing in my experience.
Apr 16, 2022 at 04:46 PM
p.1 #8Young Bride
DanielScott wrote:
Beautifully captured, John. I agree with Dan's assessment of the air grate. If you use photoshop, have you tried selecting it and using content aware fill? That tends to make easy work of this sort of editing in my experience.
I haven't used PS much, but am going to try the suggestions and repost. Sometimes objective comments are useful. Thanks!
Beautifully captured, John. I agree with Dan's assessment of the air grate. If you use photoshop, have you tried selecting it and using content aware fill? That tends to make easy work of this sort of editing in my experience.
I haven't used PS much, but am going to try the suggestions and repost. Sometimes objective comments are useful. Thanks!
Apr 16, 2022 at 05:42 PM
p.1 #9Young Bride
johnld wrote:
I haven't used PS much, but am going to try the suggestions and repost. Sometimes objective comments are useful. Thanks!
I am also "challenged" by Ps. BUT the CWT is my most used tool! If you have PsCC it is only seconds. PsCSx 3 seconds!
Good luck!
Dan
DanielScott wrote
Beautifully captured, John. I agree with Dan's assessment of the air grate. If you use photoshop, have you tried selecting it and using content aware fill? That tends to make easy work of this sort of editing in my experience.I am also "challenged" by Ps. BUT the CWT is my most used tool! If you have PsCC it is only seconds. PsCSx 3 seconds!
Good luck!
Dan
Apr 17, 2022 at 08:10 AM
p.1 #10Young Bride
OK, Here's a LR version as PS's content aware was tricker at matching the outlines of the grate. Or perhaps I just need to practice with PS more
Apr 18, 2022 at 06:13 AM
p.1 #11Young Bride
Now my eye is directed directly at this beautiful woman! She has my complete attention!
Well done!
Dan
Well done!
Dan
Apr 18, 2022 at 06:24 AM
p.1 #12Young Bride
Danpbphoto wrote:
Now my eye is directed directly at this beautiful woman! She has my complete attention!
Well done!
Dan
Thanks for the comments Dan, These suggestions were quite useful for future edits as I thought I knew everything
Now my eye is directed directly at this beautiful woman! She has my complete attention!
Well done!
Dan
Thanks for the comments Dan, These suggestions were quite useful for future edits as I thought I knew everything
Apr 18, 2022 at 06:28 AM
p.1 #13Young Bride
johnld wrote:
Well done!
DanThanks for the comments Dan, These suggestions were quite useful for future edits as I thought I knew everything
Yeah been there in my younger daze!
Dan
Danpbphoto wrote
Now my eye is directed directly at this beautiful woman! She has my complete attention!Well done!
Dan
Yeah been there in my younger daze!
Dan
Apr 18, 2022 at 06:30 AM
p.1 #14Young Bride
I think the edit is an improvement, but I would crop a little tighter from the top right corner to really bring the attention to the bride. This is a really lovely image.
Derek
Derek
Apr 18, 2022 at 06:36 AM
p.1 #15Young Bride
Dneufarth wrote:
I think the edit is an improvement, but I would crop a little tighter from the top right corner to really bring the attention to the bride. This is a really lovely image.
Derek
Thanks for the suggestion Derek. Here's a crop, but slightly out of the preferred ratio as I'd like to keep the banister in the corner for symmetry.
I think the edit is an improvement, but I would crop a little tighter from the top right corner to really bring the attention to the bride. This is a really lovely image.
Derek
Thanks for the suggestion Derek. Here's a crop, but slightly out of the preferred ratio as I'd like to keep the banister in the corner for symmetry.
Apr 18, 2022 at 07:54 AM
p.1 #17Young Bride
This beautiful bride can carry this frame easily! Very engaging smile, lovely eyes!
Dan
Dan
Apr 18, 2022 at 12:49 PM