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Archive 2021 · More Kathryn in Golden

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A couple more color images of my shoot with Kathryn in Golden, CO. The first couple are up the canyon a little ways. Feedback is welcome.


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Kathryn Golden


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Kathryn Golden 3


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Kathryn Golden 4

Jun 17, 2021 at 04:28 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · More Kathryn in Golden

Strong set. And what an elegant, lovely lady.

Jun 18, 2021 at 06:46 AM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · More Kathryn in Golden

I like the overall concept and you did use the sunlight effectively on the series. Here are the things I would have done differently.
Photo 1 - Move her legs to the side rather than straight out to the camera. Her knee looks as big as her head since it's a lot closer to the camera. Second, the dress looks strange on her right leg. It looks tucked under to expose her leg and then there's the tattered strings that should have been eliminated in post. Finally, the sun reflection in her hair is really nice, but clean it up to minimize the stray hairs.
Photo 2, 3 and 4 - Mostly minimize the stray hair. The stray hair is actually brighter and diverts attention from her face.

In general, watch the small details and frizzy hair. Hope that helps.

Jun 18, 2021 at 07:05 AM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · More Kathryn in Golden

Beautiful images of a lovely woman!!!!

Dan

Jun 18, 2021 at 08:15 AM

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Rajan Parrikar wrote:
Strong set. And what an elegant, lovely lady.

Thanks Rajan! Appreciate the feedback!

Jun 18, 2021 at 10:41 AM

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story_teller wrote:
I like the overall concept and you did use the sunlight effectively on the series. Here are the things I would have done differently.
Photo 1 - Move her legs to the side rather than straight out to the camera. Her knee looks as big as her head since it's a lot closer to the camera. Second, the dress looks strange on her right leg. It looks tucked under to expose her leg and then there's the tattered strings that should have been eliminated in post. Finally, the sun reflection in her hair is really nice, but clean it up to...Show more →

Thanks a lot for the feedback, all great points! I had not considered the stray hair as a distraction, but I can certainly see your point. :-)

Jun 18, 2021 at 10:45 AM

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Danpbphoto wrote:
Beautiful images of a lovely woman!!!!

Dan

Thanks Dan! Kathryn is a joy to work with!

Jun 18, 2021 at 10:46 AM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · More Kathryn in Golden

Excellent set of portraits! And, yes, she is a lovely model. I like the pose in #2 but the overwhelming bright spot to her left bothers me a little. I like the background in #3. And the first image is my top pick although I believe that it would benefit from a little tighter crop.

Joshua

Jun 19, 2021 at 09:25 AM

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AGeoJO wrote:
Excellent set of portraits! And, yes, she is a lovely model. I like the pose in #2 but the overwhelming bright spot to her left bothers me a little. I like the background in #3. And the first image is my top pick although I believe that it would benefit from a little tighter crop.

Joshua

Thanks Joshua, appreciate the feedback! Yes, tight crop always works well with portraits and these could be a bit tighter. I was trying to also show some of the stunning scenery and beautiful golden hour light 🙂.

Jun 20, 2021 at 12:17 PM

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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · More Kathryn in Golden

These are really nice, but for the first couple shots in the canyon I was really hoping for something wider to showcase the scene a little more. It's such a lovely setting that I want to see more!

Jun 20, 2021 at 04:46 PM

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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · More Kathryn in Golden

DJSquizzy wrote:
These are really nice, but for the first couple shots in the canyon I was really hoping for something wider to showcase the scene a little more. It's such a lovely setting that I want to see more!

Thanks! Funny that your comment is to see more of the canyon, and the comment of the previous person was to zoom in tighter on Kathryn. Personal preference! 🙂 ... I have both kind of shots, didn't post all 😉 ... thanks again for the feedback, much appreciated!!

Jun 20, 2021 at 09:17 PM

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nice lookin set

Jun 24, 2021 at 03:41 AM


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