I agree that the backgrounds are better. Looks like you are taking some comments to heart and making changes/improvements. It's good to see you improve.
As for this one, look at your composition. Look at the space above her head. It's not needed. It doesn't add anything to the shot. Crop it away (or compose it away when you shoot). That will make her larger in the frame, which is a good thing.
Yes comments are constructive and appresciated. It would be nice to be able to say I am posting the photos of girls in a sequential manner so it would appear that I am modifying my methods according to comments received here but that's not really the case. I am stuck at home like I assume many of you are so I am posting from my "archives". My posting from them are randomly selected according to my fancy that day. But they don't need to be sequential for the comments made about them to be meaningful.
