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May 28, 2020 at 12:31 PM
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Nicely done Pitter. She has a very pensive look. What is she thinking?


May 28, 2020 at 04:21 PM
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She is thinking "I want to look cool for this photo" but in Spanish of course.


May 28, 2020 at 07:40 PM
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This one is looking *much* better! I like how you are using the lens wide open now, softening the background.

I would have had her remove the red hair band and maybe brush her hair to get rid of the flyaways.



May 29, 2020 at 03:28 PM
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Yes, smoother background, for sure. Nicely done, Peter! Just out of curiosity, it looks like are you shooting JPG; is that right?

Joshua



May 29, 2020 at 07:46 PM
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Yes jpg.


May 30, 2020 at 07:40 AM
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I agree that the backgrounds are better. Looks like you are taking some comments to heart and making changes/improvements. It's good to see you improve.

As for this one, look at your composition. Look at the space above her head. It's not needed. It doesn't add anything to the shot. Crop it away (or compose it away when you shoot). That will make her larger in the frame, which is a good thing.



May 30, 2020 at 07:57 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Camila


Very lovely young woman Pitter! I like in framing as is but comments are constructive!!!
Dan



May 30, 2020 at 09:20 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Camila


Yes comments are constructive and appresciated. It would be nice to be able to say I am posting the photos of girls in a sequential manner so it would appear that I am modifying my methods according to comments received here but that's not really the case. I am stuck at home like I assume many of you are so I am posting from my "archives". My posting from them are randomly selected according to my fancy that day. But they don't need to be sequential for the comments made about them to be meaningful.


May 30, 2020 at 05:46 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Camila


AGeoJO wrote:
Yes, smoother background, for sure. Nicely done, Peter! Just out of curiosity, it looks like are you shooting JPG; is that right?

Joshua

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Joshua, how can you tell (even though Pitter says that is true). expert eyes!




Jun 02, 2020 at 09:31 PM





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