, I don't know Greg personally but if I ever post anything on the forum, I want him to critique - because he does not 'sugar coat' like he said. We need more people like Greg. His comments may appear harsh at first but they seem honest and that counts (for me).
These are wonderful pictures, she has a great smile - you are a fantastic photographer, keep posting.
I like the lighting, the model and locations shot. Well done!!
The compositions are at eye level or above it in all. If you didnt already try, do some compositions from below eye level so model is looking slightly down to camera
In #2, the hair trapped in her hand caught my attention right away but I like the shot alot.
With a smile like that just about anyone could get a good photo of her.
I do like your choice of locations, compositions and lighting.
Combine her beauty and your skills and you've got a winner.