Really nice work! You might want to consider eliminating or blending the black line under the hair on her forehead. It's a small issue, but stands out a bit.
When I took the picture of the drinking elf, the wind overthrow the lightstand and one SB-800 dive into the lake.
Back at home (after shooting with the water-filled SB-800 the rest of the day), I opened the SB-800
a little bit to blow it out.
Afterwards I dried the SB-800 in rice.