Got an hour with her in a local park, right before a massive storm moved in with lightning and a downpour that almost drove me off the highway on my way back home. Wish I had a few more hours to shoot with her at a different, better park or a studio with proper lighting. She's fun to work with, has traveled a lot and is interesting to converse with.
#1 is excellant. She is placed correctly in the frame. The bokeh is excellent! Her pose is excellent! In fact, the bokeh is excellent in all. Very sultry beauty in the last!
Dan
#2 is an excellent example of the 'caught while in air type' of pic. The outstretched necklace is a great touch. The expression of your model in the last is great. Just wish the shot showed less of her back. Or more! Though that might break the rules on this site.
Danpbphoto wrote:
#1 is excellant. She is placed correctly in the frame. The bokeh is excellent! Her pose is excellent! In fact, the bokeh is excellent in all. Very sultry beauty in the last!
Dan
Thank you .. Yeah she is beautiful.
Brev00 wrote:
#2 is an excellent example of the 'caught while in air type' of pic. The outstretched necklace is a great touch. The expression of your model in the last is great. Just wish the shot showed less of her back. Or more! Though that might break the rules on this site.
That is a crop of a fully nude pose. Didn't want to get banned here, so cropped the heck out of it.
I agree with Greg about #1. My first and lasting impression is "where are the legs?" In addition, her bottom half seems disproportionately shortened so that the overall effect is grotesque.
VickiB wrote:
I agree with Greg about #1. My first and lasting impression is "where are the legs?" In addition, her bottom half seems disproportionately shortened so that the overall effect is grotesque.
Ok
It's obvious she's sitting/kneeling in #1 so that's no problem to me. I just don't care for her expression. She looks mad.
I love the expression in the last though, very sexy. A little less back would be ok also.
2 and 4 work well 4 me. actually 4 is my favorite. you could decrease the exposure a touch on her back in 4, but does not appear anything is clipped so should be and easy fix.
