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p.1 #1 · Gloomy Afternoon


Was out shooting with my photography club on campus and it had been raining. On the way back we saw this table and I couldn't resist. Only thing I don't like about it is the placement of the flowers. I tried removing them but it proved to be a bit too difficult for me. I would have liked to see them placed in the center or just not be there at all.








Nov 07, 2018 at 12:38 PM
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p.1 #2 · Gloomy Afternoon


Hopefully you got a *really* wide shot as well.

That table alone in a huge field is a dream setup for an epic shot.

greg



Nov 07, 2018 at 09:26 PM
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p.1 #3 · Gloomy Afternoon


Totally agree with gheller that a wide angle on this could have been a great shot.


Nov 08, 2018 at 09:52 AM
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p.1 #4 · Gloomy Afternoon


gheller wrote:
Hopefully you got a *really* wide shot as well.

That table alone in a huge field is a dream setup for an epic shot.

greg


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story_teller wrote:
Totally agree with gheller that a wide angle on this could have been a great shot.


I actually did take that shot but wasn't really happy with how it turned out. Didn't have a ton of time to shoot at the location unfortunately.




Nov 08, 2018 at 10:38 AM
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p.1 #5 · Gloomy Afternoon


Very nice shot. Although she's on a hillside, and the table wasn't level, I would try rotating the image counterclockwise a bit to see how it looks with the table top level. I would also play around cropping a bit off the left and top edge of the frame. I agree with your comments on the flowers.

Very nice picture.



Nov 08, 2018 at 11:06 AM
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p.1 #6 · Gloomy Afternoon


film_4ever wrote:
Very nice shot. Although she's on a hillside, and the table wasn't level, I would try rotating the image counterclockwise a bit to see how it looks with the table top level. I would also play around cropping a bit off the left and top edge of the frame. I agree with your comments on the flowers.

Very nice picture.


I actually did that in my initial edit, but the table is already so close to the edge of the screen that when I rotate it in LR it cuts off part of the table if you try and make it completely level. I can get it "almost" level, but then the table is basically right on the edge of the image and it's still not quite level.



Nov 08, 2018 at 02:12 PM
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p.1 #7 · Gloomy Afternoon


Hope you don't mind. This is just what I might try to do if it were my image. It's a different crop and a bit more contrast, etc. Not to say it's better, just a different version with a little "pop".







Nov 09, 2018 at 07:37 AM





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