p.1 #2 · Single Speed Light Outdoors c and c please
I like 2 and 8.
They all look good to me from a flash fill perspective.
The other comment is that the contrast looks a bit high on my screen. I'd want a lot more softness for a female subject. But, I guess strong shadows are inevitable with a single flash.
p.1 #4 · Single Speed Light Outdoors c and c please
I like everything. The lighting, the processing, DOF, etc.
Personally I think the close crops are the best. The amber colors of the bokeh in the background of the second to last ones are visually interesting on a second look.