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https://yuliapphive.com/cdn/Public/Portrait.jpg


Mar 22, 2018 at 07:30 PM
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p.1 #2 · One light


Beautiful! And the photo is nice too.


Mar 22, 2018 at 09:29 PM
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p.1 #3 · One light


It is a nice start to studio photography, but I suggest stopping down so that you get both eyes in focus.

Catchlights are nice, but I find the light a bit hot (see spot on nose?) for my taste. I also find the crop a bit too tight for my taste.

Keep posting!

greg



Mar 22, 2018 at 11:09 PM
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p.1 #4 · One light


thank you both. tried a selfie with little makeup and wanted to post it SOOC
it is definitely constructive, will keep it in mind



Mar 23, 2018 at 02:16 AM
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p.1 #5 · One light


Great job for what was apparently a very limited effort. Another light on your hair would be useful for separation. I do like the low key style of this so I’m thinking just a little would make a big difference.


Mar 23, 2018 at 08:30 AM
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p.1 #6 · One light


Beautiful image.

Agree with the comment above about using a second light (or even a reflector) to try to get some separation of your hair from the background. The hotspots on your nose and lips could easily be fixed with the clone tool or spot healing.

Thanks for posting. I'm really enjoying all your images so far.



Mar 23, 2018 at 10:40 AM
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p.1 #7 · One light



Are you wanting c&c? you didn't ask for it, so I wasn't planning to give it to you.



Mar 23, 2018 at 11:29 AM
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p.1 #8 · One light


Nicely done, with the previous comments considered. My preference would be a crop of the bottom just below the hair or a lot farther down. As it is now, it calls attention to what you are wearing/not wearing.


Mar 23, 2018 at 09:09 PM
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p.1 #9 · One light


Beautiful self-portrait. Excellent skin tones and a nice, warm overall feel. I like the way you brought out the red of your hair, but, I feel the reds combined with the darker tones are a bit too strong at the bottom of the image. I like the way your head is angled to the right showing off your perfectly shaped nose. One suggestion: raise the camera just a tad so you lift your chin just slightly. It might bring out the jaw lines and chin, lift the shadows on your neck, and cause you to open your eyes a bit more. Terrific slight smile and very well groomed eyebrows. Keep up the good work!


Mar 25, 2018 at 02:13 AM





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