(1) That bright object next to her head is really distracting
(2) Her nails look to have been done several days ago. The fake nails are glued, then the real nails grow, leaving a gap.
(3) I think this would be even better without the bright yellow behind her. I won't tell you what this reminds my adolescent mind of
(4) That dirty grill just sticks out. Also, might prefer it without the tire cut off - especially since you have so much room to her left.
Overall, super nice set, great post processing. I sure hope you got some smiles. All too often we go for the sultry look and forget the smiles. I see it here on FM all too often.
gheller wrote:
*Really* nice work. If I were to nitpic...
(1) That bright object next to her head is really distracting
(2) Her nails look to have been done several days ago. The fake nails are glued, then the real nails grow, leaving a gap.
(3) I think this would be even better without the bright yellow behind her. I won't tell you what this reminds my adolescent mind of
(4) That dirty grill just sticks out. Also, might prefer it without the tire cut off - especially since you have so much room to her left.
Overall, super nice set, great post processing. I sure hope you got some smiles. All too often we go for the sultry look and forget the smiles. I see it here on FM all too often.
These are all really good but #1 is the standout for me. The model, the poses and the settings are all excellent. Did you use a fog machine for #3?
Thanks for sharing.
gregfixit wrote:
These are all really good but #1 is the standout for me. The model, the poses and the settings are all excellent. Did you use a fog machine for #3?
Thanks for sharing.
Greg
Thank you for the nice comment. I used a smoke bomb. A lot cheaper..lol!
#1 is my favorite, too. Very nice colors all working well together. Red can often overwhelm an image but works seamlessly with the overall presentation here. The second is very nice. Beautiful model. Nice closeup. My nit here is that it seems of a certain type one sees a lot of online. I think you captured a great pose in #3. Excellent composition. I feel the colors do overwhelm somewhat here. I might try a black and white with this one as it has great lines and textures. Thanks for sharing!
Good! She is a very attractive and photogenic. A smile , for me, would enhance her beauty and your compositions, not that your posts don't, just another idea.
Again very nice!
Dan
