Pretty girl. Personally, I don't like that chin down pose, I would also like to see more of the door and less of the blank wall. The door has character, but then I like old doors. IMHO, it might be a touch hot. Just my .02
John
I would have preferred a dress that was more complementary to the color scheme of the photo. The bra strap needs to be cloned out.
I'm not a fan of the chin down pose either. The loop short lighting is effective, but with her chin lowered, the nose shadow spills over the lips, which is considered a no-no from a traditional lighting standpoint. Some subtle vignetting would help draw the eye to the subject.
The lighting is a bit too harsh. It would look better if you shot with a large aperture and put some distance between the subject and the door. I think shooting in portrait orientation would put more emphasis on the subject. The way it is now, the emphasis seems more on the door. (Again if you put more space between the subject and the door, and shot through a large aperture, the door would be blurred and deemphasized. Agree with the previous comments on the chin down also.
You've got an attractive model, and a nice location.
Nice photo, but I hate seeing bra straps.....I would have asked her to pull the strap off her shoulder into the dress in some fashion or covered it with hair..but that's me.....
