p.1 #1 · WATER + FIRE // Editorial shot in the desert
I've really been working on putting more meaning and more of myself into my work over the past year and it's been so much more fulfilling.
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Sep 28, 2016 at 03:39 PM
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p.1 #2 · WATER + FIRE // Editorial shot in the desert
love it! Voted as featured thread! my only minor critique is in #4, the girl in the black top's skintone is a tad too orange IMO (compared to the rest of the set)
p.1 #9 · WATER + FIRE // Editorial shot in the desert
Very good photos of these beautiful ladies. I would have loved a little bit more DOF in the last photo. In the #3 I would have liked the model in the tub to face the camera more or even look up to the standing model.
Like the first and last photo most.
p.1 #10 · WATER + FIRE // Editorial shot in the desert
Besides the technicalities of lighting, composition, dof, etc., I think the atmosphere in these photos is exceptional and is aided and abetted by a great choice of wardrobe for these two young women. With the hair, a very stylized feel. My only quibble is with the cropping as some of the images feel too tight while #3 feels loose and imbalanced with the tight framing low and so much space high and the standing subject nearly dead center. I might have rearranged that scene a bit also getting rid of whatever is in the front left corner. While I generally don't care for cropped fingers, the eyes have it in the last shot. Stunning portrait. Love the limited tones.
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