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p.1 #1 · Taylor B from Switzerland


Very short portrait shooting with Taylor (age 19) from switzerland










Critics and Comments are welcome


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Edited on Jun 30, 2016 at 05:05 AM · View previous versions



Jun 29, 2016 at 03:30 PM
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p.1 #2 · Taylor B from Switzerland


The first image is stunning. The others are good but the dust motes made visible by your chosen aperture are a distraction.


Jun 29, 2016 at 04:18 PM
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p.1 #3 · Taylor B from Switzerland


Number 4 for me. Fantastic


Jun 29, 2016 at 06:20 PM
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p.1 #4 · Taylor B from Switzerland


The first image is a killer! Well done.

The model is stunning! The rain drops frozen in the air detract from the last two images.



Jun 29, 2016 at 07:51 PM
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p.1 #5 · Taylor B from Switzerland


Agreed, the first one is wonderful.
This is proof, also, black and white really works for some images.
Lovely. No, super lovely!

Ed



Jun 29, 2016 at 08:01 PM
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p.1 #6 · Taylor B from Switzerland


Thank you all for the comments and critics
The first image is also my favorite picture.



Jun 30, 2016 at 02:52 AM
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p.1 #7 · Taylor B from Switzerland


One New image


Before retouching:




Jun 30, 2016 at 04:28 AM
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p.1 #8 · Taylor B from Switzerland


Having her sidelit with her hair providing some shadows for her lovely face works very well in #1. Very nice even tones for her face. The brightness of #2 is a bit much for me with her hair, face, and column all being a similar intensity. Maybe lower brightness. Maybe would have liked to have seen a vertical in #3 as the top crop seems a bit awkward against the clear background setting. Or maybe wider. The pose and look in #4 is very nice. I might like to bring back some of the blacks for more contrast but that is my taste. It is probably just flare from the strong backlighting. But, the composition is very good. I am a little confused about the pair at the end. The retouched one is the top with the strong skin tone texture? The texture seems a little strong to me. It might seem more natural if you added grain throughout the image. Maybe use a narrower aperture next time? My thoughts on a very nice set.


Jun 30, 2016 at 12:17 PM
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p.1 #9 · Taylor B from Switzerland


1 and 3 are very nice indeed.


Jul 10, 2016 at 09:21 AM





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