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p.1 #1 · The storm that got away


In celebration of this year's excellent monsoon season, I thought I would share a photo taken last week on my first successful shoot of the season. This storm was elusive. I left Flagstaff after work to chase it northward with the intent of landing on one of my closer go-to locations. It moved way too fast. I hoped to end up at Wupatki National Monument. Instead I ended up at Coalmine Canyon by the time I caught up to it. It also lost most of its power, so I missed out on the lightning.

I had some other locations in mind, but my Jeep was instantly thwarted by CRAZY mud. I thought I could cross the muddy section by gunning it, but it stopped me in my tracks. I got lucky and managed to back-out, park the Jeep and jog the rest of the way in mud-laden hiking shoes in time to catch this composition. The shoes are still on my patio waiting to be cleaned . . .





Jul 14, 2015 at 03:48 AM
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p.1 #2 · The storm that got away


Very nice, but it works a little better for me if you cropped a little off the bottom.


Jul 14, 2015 at 08:12 AM
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p.1 #3 · The storm that got away


That s an amazing work, lighten a bit the top left cliff, print it and put on a wall.




Jul 14, 2015 at 08:50 AM
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p.1 #4 · The storm that got away


A very arresting shot. Well done!


Jul 14, 2015 at 09:49 AM
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p.1 #5 · The storm that got away


Outstanding.


Jul 14, 2015 at 09:53 AM
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p.1 #6 · The storm that got away


Tim Knutson wrote:
Outstanding.


What Tim said.

Dan



Jul 14, 2015 at 10:49 AM
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p.1 #7 · The storm that got away


I would be proud to have this image, and great story.


Jul 14, 2015 at 11:04 AM
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p.1 #8 · The storm that got away


Great quality of light - beautiful shot.


Jul 14, 2015 at 12:06 PM
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p.1 #9 · The storm that got away


Super image. Love the depth throughout.


Jul 14, 2015 at 01:18 PM
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p.1 #10 · The storm that got away


very nice


Jul 14, 2015 at 01:48 PM
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p.1 #11 · The storm that got away


Very nice work! Excellent story to go along with it. Looking forward to seeing more.


Jul 14, 2015 at 01:58 PM
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p.1 #12 · The storm that got away


Stunning image, great sky and the canyon is incredible.
Brian



Jul 14, 2015 at 02:13 PM
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p.1 #13 · The storm that got away


Excellent. The sky is rough and tumble as is the complimentary landscape!


Jul 14, 2015 at 02:24 PM
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p.1 #14 · The storm that got away


Wonderful shot.

I would go further than fplstudio and lighten the whole canyon in the foreground a tad. It would bring out the depth of the shot that much more.



Jul 14, 2015 at 02:38 PM
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p.1 #15 · The storm that got away


Hey John,

What a cool shot! And I know from experience that mud is nothing to fool around with, I always carry carpet strips in my jeep just in case. And I have found they also work when stuck in snow...

Lot's of suggestions, for me, I don't know, I like it just as it is lit. But this is an image I am sure that could have a lot of possibilities. And I have been in Coal Mine Canyon a few times, but I don't recall this spot, hmmm... was it shooting towards the east, towards the Hopi side? It's hard to tell how that light in this shot is being bounced around as to a direction.

Jim



Jul 14, 2015 at 04:01 PM
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p.1 #16 · The storm that got away


Beautiful image!!!


Jul 14, 2015 at 04:21 PM
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p.1 #17 · The storm that got away


This turned out fantastic. I really enjoy your composition, and the calm feeling. The way the canyon leads toward the storm is excellent, and I like the look of the soft light on the harsh environment. Very well done!


Jul 14, 2015 at 06:22 PM
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p.1 #18 · The storm that got away


Thanks for the comments everyone. I am tinkering with the shadow detail on this, but I won't lock in any changes until I can see it printed on Fujiflex under a proper halogen. Shadows are extremely sensitive. The perfect balance between deep shadows and lack of detail comes down to a few points of levels adjustment.

As for the specific section of canyon . . . it's essentially the first part you encounter if you were to walk off the main dirt road, NE from the base of the hill near the highway. This sections has some very cool features that were new to me that night. The most notable is this are that is super deep but almost narrow enough to jump across . . . if you're nuts. It's a more intimate place where my only company was a couple of cliff-dwelling birds.

The light was diffused by a thin cloud to the west. A tiny bit of sun hit the white wall near frame center which topped off the scene nicely I thought. The shot is facing almost exactly Northeast.



Jul 14, 2015 at 10:17 PM
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p.1 #19 · The storm that got away


Slabshaft wrote:
A tiny bit of sun hit the white wall near frame center which topped off the scene nicely I thought.


With the sky colors, this "white wall" really contributed to a very nice capture...




Jul 15, 2015 at 11:44 AM
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p.1 #20 · The storm that got away


Worth the effort - fantastic image


Jul 15, 2015 at 12:05 PM
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