Image 1, you've used that same bar for many images in the past. Need to break out of your comfort zone. Don't care for the hair in the face. Model looks very stiff and uncomfortable.
Image 2 is okay, but the pose is very contrived and cliche. In my opinion, the large OOF zone on the right side of image doesn't add anything.
Image 3 is a very nice natural looking pose. Red sign on LHS of frame is distracting.
Image 4 is pretty nice also, but would have been better without the car parked below.
I know you said the images were SOOC, but IMHO, image 3 and 4 need a bit of sharpening to the face.
film_4ever wrote:
Nice set. Not one of your best though.
Image 1, you've used that same bar for many images in the past. Need to break out of your comfort zone. Don't care for the hair in the face. Model looks very stiff and uncomfortable.
Image 2 is okay, but the pose is very contrived and cliche. In my opinion, the large OOF zone on the right side of image doesn't add anything.
Image 3 is a very nice natural looking pose. Red sign on LHS of frame is distracting.
Image 4 is pretty nice also, but would have been better without the car parked below.
I know you said the images were SOOC, but IMHO, image 3 and 4 need a bit of sharpening to the face.
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^^ This! A real pleasure seeing genuine thoughtful C&C.
film_4ever wrote:
Nice set. Not one of your best though.
Image 1, you've used that same bar for many images in the past. Need to break out of your comfort zone. Don't care for the hair in the face. Model looks very stiff and uncomfortable.
Image 2 is okay, but the pose is very contrived and cliche. In my opinion, the large OOF zone on the right side of image doesn't add anything.
Image 3 is a very nice natural looking pose. Red sign on LHS of frame is distracting.
Image 4 is pretty nice also, but would have been better without the car parked below.
I know you said the images were SOOC, but IMHO, image 3 and 4 need a bit of sharpening to the face.
Thanks for sharing !...Show more →
thanks for the input film_4ever, i appreciate that
but never used this bar before, this the first time
I like the refined pretty woman in the unrefined background and think it works well making 2-4 lovely pictures. In my opinion, the problem is with her hair out of sorts in 1, it makes her unrefined too. I think if you have her hair as you do in 3 in 1, you would have a spectacular picture.
