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I really like this shot, Ian - particularly the restrained (if any) skin processing. She's charming and you captured her in an elegant and truthful fashion. I love her strong yet feminine features and your lighting does them justice.
You didn't ask for critique but...
I'm very comfortable with imperfections and maybe this was intentional, but the fake eyelashes do jump out. I'd have been tempted to clone out (what appears to be) the eyelash "seam" on her left eye and perhaps even add a softer beginning and end to the lashes on her right eye.
Top left, there's a remnant of some vertical element that once I noticed it, became distracting - mostly because I don't know what it is. Bottom right, I do like the way the dark triangle completes the framing, but with crops like this I'm always curious as to how the composition would work if I let her skin fill the bottom/right edges.
In any case, I enjoyed this image as-is very much. Thanks for sharing.
Chuck
Edit - good call out, Jim. I didn't initially see that.
Edited on Feb 20, 2015 at 07:50 AM · View previous versions
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