Great capture of your beautiful family. My first impression was WOW! My second impression was "I wonder how much different/better it might have been if you had placed them on the right side of the frame and left the open area on the left". The reason I think that is because your wife seems to be compositionally crowding your son into the edge of the frame.
If you cropped to get this composition, I'd like to see what it looks like as recommended. It might not be any better, but I'd like to see it.
These are just mostly uneducated recommendations. Please don't take offense and also please remember my first impression... "WOW!" :-)
Beautiful!
One of the photos that you want on your office desk all the time
Just by looking at the photo I can feel the love between mom and son.
Cuteness overload.
Lovely. As I first scanned this image I thought how refreshing your blue leaning processing is for this scene.
I disagree with the change the composition idea. While the "standard rule" would be to put the taller of the two subjects to the right with the negative space on the left I find the symbolism of this shot more compelling. Here we have the mother protecting her cub from the potential danger emminating from the negative space.
Yep, love this one. The blue is interesting. I'm ambivalent about the composition. I probably would have put them on the other side. Thing is, with the consistent background, this is a very easy cut and paste if you want to look at it.
Nisa wrote:
thank you all for your suggestions . May be it will work better if they was on the right side but I like the way it is.
The client his happy and you have a winner!
For what it's worth, I really like this shot the way it is even though my immediate bias went for a right frame like others. I stepped back and realized that yes it still works on the left and that sometimes our "default position" isn't always the only option
Nice family shot. Yes ideally I'd prefer to see them on the right and ideally see his full smile, but still, nice capture, I'm sure it was cold and wet and time was limited.
