p.1 #1 · It's spring all over again here in the desert!
There's an old, ugly dirt lot just over the frontage road from me. But it's now covered with flowers! We've gotten so much rain this summer that the desert is blooming again and having a second spring. Love it!
The one of the older sister kissing the younger sister was fun to edit because the younger girl actually had a slight scowl on her face, so I used the liquify tool to give her a smile and raise her eyebrow, and then lightened the shadows from the eyebrow scowl. Photoshop amazes me :-D
p.1 #7 · It's spring all over again here in the desert!
Very well done and your model is a real cutie too. Now I am looking forward to getting back to the desert next week and making pictures of my granddaughter.....
p.1 #8 · It's spring all over again here in the desert!
Stunning. Such beauty.
One really minor nitpick...my eye is drawn to the older girls shoulder peeking through her hair in #3. Not sure if you can work some PS magic to soften it, or clone some hair over it...or leave it as is if you don't feel it's an issue. As I said, really minor.
p.1 #13 · It's spring all over again here in the desert!
Absolutely stunning captures!!! Especially 3!
In that context I'd like to offer some CC:
1 is a great image from a technical perspective, but quite boring from an expression, pose and dynamics perspective - would have loved to see a giggle from the subject, or even just a smile. As it stands, 1 is more an advertisement for the lens.
