reesem wrote:
These images are very well done, from the lighting, to location, to post production. #3 is a bit awkward in the posing and perspective (her looking back at the camera from the ground), but the rest are solid. Thank you for sharing! As mentioned earlier, you should definitely come out of retirement!
Interesting, I thought it was the best of the set.
nextelbuddy wrote:
my crit would be #2. though the image is straight using other vertical lines but the horizontal line of the railing being off is bothersome.
great work otherwise!
Thanks for the compliment. I think actually, there aren't any straight lines in it at all. The building is a historical building and settling very badly. I worked to get some of the lines as straight as they are. I don't even know how they got that handicap ramp through inspection and feel bad for the folks trying to navigate it.
fstop212 wrote:
rusty? On my best day I couldn't produce this quality. Nice job
Thanks for the compliment fstop212!
trenchmonkey wrote:
Interesting, I thought it was the best of the set.
Trenchmonkey, that was the parents' favorite shot as well, they bought a gallery block of it.
my only nit would be the tag on her hat in #3. my eyes are drawn away from hers to the tag.
beautiful girl, excellent photos, no wonder her mom had tears in her eyes while viewing.
enjoy the time with your family while taking a moment every now and then like this.
Lisa_Holloway wrote:
These are beautiful! And this girl is a senior? Wow! Girls didn't look like that back when I was in high school. lol
Thanks Lisa! Yes, it seems they go from tweens to 20 now a days, skipping a few years we used to go through.
Kenneth Farver wrote:
my only nit would be the tag on her hat in #3. my eyes are drawn away from hers to the tag.
beautiful girl, excellent photos, no wonder her mom had tears in her eyes while viewing.
enjoy the time with your family while taking a moment every now and then like this.
Thanks for the comment Kenneth. I left it in, in case its one of THE brands you are supposed to wear if you are a teen. I should have asked and taken it out had it turned out to not be one of the popular brands. It does pull the viewer's eye from her eyes and face. Only having taken two senior seasons off, this and last summer's, I've found I've already lost track of what's all the rage with that age group.
Shepherd_in_CO wrote:
Thanks for your comment Michael. Sorry the neon is distracting to you, to me it adds the urban flair we were shooting for.
Thanks! No time spent in photography is ever wasted, I'm sure you have some lovely images!
Not quite sure why you can't see her feet in the frame, maybe I just don't quite understand your comment.
Thanks for the multiple comments, glad I wasn't the only one confused. Maybe its a browser or tablet issue, not scrolling all the way down?
No problem, this place is funny sometimes...first the model has no feet, then she has to pee. Good thing her legs wasn't cut off too, she'd have a hell of time peeing.
