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p.1 #1 · Field of dreams


The dream is to be here when the flowers are prime and the sunset is like the one I got a couple weeks ago.




Looking southeast about an hour before sunset






light on the mountain, still early






wide shot as sun goes down






last of the show




Jun 28, 2014 at 06:41 PM
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p.1 #2 · Field of dreams


Wonderful DOF of field on these, Ben.
First is nice. Not sure about the ideal crop but I dont think the 50/50 horizon split works to add anything.
For the others, I feel more contained in the meadow, enveloped by the wildflowers, esp in 3 and 4. It evokes many pleasant feelings and is added by the more pano crops and more on top, in the sky. 3 is my favorite. A beauty. Second feels like you are trying too include too much. Greens might be a bit too saturated but overall the colors feel realistic and the sky seems right.
BTW, I suspect your camera is level, knowing that precision is your goal and forte. But I wonder about a slightly less tilted meadow for aesthetics.
Scott



Jun 28, 2014 at 07:13 PM
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p.1 #3 · Field of dreams


Thanks Scott, I really appreciate the feedback. After watching the tutorial Karen posted, the one thing I am not doing is tilting my camera. I could have used the 17TSE here, but I have trouble focusing so I reach for an AF lens first.

But it occurs to me that the TSE only allows moving up or down while keeping it level. If I tilt the camera, I get perspective issues again. ( I know these images do not really have any). But I need to experiment and maybe tilting the camera compresses the height and allows getting all the elements in with a different horizon.

On the first, I never even thought about the centered horizon, I never see them unless I force myself to look for them. It was early and I was just getting myself adjusted to the scenes. The rest were taken from the far edge of that field in the first but looking toward the camera position of the first..

On 2, I only included it here as cropped because of that pink cloud upper right. I have a hard time losing precious color.

3 is also my favorite and I often crop to 16x9, in fact I have a few frames that take 16x9 aspect.

I only show 4 because it had a bit more color. But the story of course is the meadow. I was here (nearby) 5 nights back and had a moose walk though my scene. I got a sunset then too, but the flowers were pretty scant. I may show that shot another time.

I have some less tilted meadows from another day. Same scene as the first. I will add it here. Tell me what you think.

Edit, I just reread this and I think you meant to level the meadow line (raise it on the right side). I thought you meant tilt the lens downward to change change the perceived slope of the meadow.









Jun 28, 2014 at 08:06 PM
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p.1 #4 · Field of dreams


Here is last weeks shot when the Moose walked through the scene. Just for fun, CC if you like.

I will show a 100% crop so you can see the moose better. 27 mm is a bit wide for wildlife.




last week with moose







crop of moose




Jun 29, 2014 at 11:48 AM
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p.1 #5 · Field of dreams


Love the shots , thanks for sharing.


Jun 29, 2014 at 12:14 PM
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p.1 #6 · Field of dreams


roger lund wrote:
Love the shots , thanks for sharing.


Glad you like them you and anyone else feel free to comment. This is something I do every year and I know I can improve.



Jun 29, 2014 at 01:54 PM
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p.1 #7 · Field of dreams


Printed the 1st and 3rd from the initial post. The first prints fine, the 3rd is way too dark. Some scenes just don't work well as prints.


Jul 01, 2014 at 10:08 AM
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p.1 #8 · Field of dreams


Hope you don't mind me channeling my inner Gursky Ben (i.e., just call me Lisle Krolsky; lol). Wonder captures for sure.

hrez here





Jul 01, 2014 at 10:30 AM
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p.1 #9 · Field of dreams


You boil it down to its elements, field and sky. You have some unique ways to render images, you should tell us about how you go about it sometime.



Jul 01, 2014 at 10:33 AM
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p.1 #10 · Field of dreams


Thanks Ben; created a tutorial on how to create Gursky's at link below (for the field, I just used a gradient instead of the horizontal blur technique). Of course, I had to split the sky (should have tried better w/ making the sky more varied) and flower field running Resynthesizer yet again to heal the transparent boundary when I merged the too.

http://justpaste.it/horizontalstretched



Jul 01, 2014 at 10:39 AM
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p.1 #11 · Field of dreams


Thanks, so resynthesizer is a plug-in? Or is it a stand alone? I am probably too much of a realist to do this but I do appreciate you taking the time to render my images and show me some alternatives. Always feel free to modify any image I post.



Jul 01, 2014 at 10:52 AM
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p.1 #12 · Field of dreams


Thanks Ben. Resynthesizer is a GIMP plugin that you have to download separately since it does not come pre-packaged with GIMP. It's only recently been upgraded (a little faster) but still is way too slow (took, I would say, around 10 minutes to render the lillies in your case). Still, beats cloning/merging my 1000 miles. lol

If you have GIMP and Python installed (believe the newest versions of GIMP includes Python finally), you can get Resynthesizer from link below (original Resynthesizer does not require Python and it still works by the way; I keep both versions since the original, though even slower, does a better job at seamless merging for certain types of results).

http://registry.gimp.org/node/27986



Jul 01, 2014 at 11:05 AM
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p.1 #13 · Field of dreams


As a side note, Resynthesizer is also good at creating Corn Mazes and Crop Circles. Did the one below recently.

https://www.flickr.com/photos/34520999@N05/14476646583/sizes/o/



Jul 01, 2014 at 11:14 AM
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p.1 #14 · Field of dreams


I don't have either gimp or Python, I have heard of gimp but not Python.

So this is how they do corn mazes



Jul 01, 2014 at 11:21 AM
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p.1 #15 · Field of dreams


ben egbert wrote:
......So this is how they do corn mazes


I suspect so Ben. lololol




Jul 01, 2014 at 12:30 PM
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p.1 #16 · Field of dreams


These are very nice, Ben. The photos and the PP are wonderful.


Jul 01, 2014 at 12:53 PM
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p.1 #17 · Field of dreams


dmacmillan wrote:
These are very nice, Ben. The photos and the PP are wonderful.


Thanks, glad you like them.



Jul 01, 2014 at 03:00 PM
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p.1 #18 · Field of dreams


Just wanted to brag; fooled a few people with my corn render (though it does look fake to me but then again, I rendered it; lol).

https://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/1301655



Jul 03, 2014 at 02:38 PM
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p.1 #19 · Field of dreams


I like the one with the moose off in the distance. It is a subtle addition to the landscape, but it pulls my eye in a great way. Great pics. Thanks for sharing


Jul 04, 2014 at 04:05 PM





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