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p.2 #6 · p.2 #6 · My Stunning Daughter - an experiment in contrast and juxtaposition | |
The pictures are of course beautiful, so my thoughts will definitely be more of personal preferences, but I think I would've put in a little bit more action into the pictures, like with her walking somewhere or crouching or something. The pistol just seems to hang limp to the side, as if she forgot it was in her hand, or as if it's the test shot the moment before you said, "okay, now that I have the exposure right, give me a cool pose and a grin" or something like that. I feel like even the slight bit of her holding the gun away from her body in #2 adds life into her pose when compared to the others. Also, in the rifle picture her left arm could've been doing something interesting like gripping the magazine, instead of being completely hidden, which doesn't bother me at first, but the longer I look at it the more I convince myself that it is a picture of her one-armed twin.
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