I must say the breasts (in the Lindsey photo) look odd in this picture. IMO you should either leave the nipples alone, or crop the shot. (it looks like they were removed?)
Is it just me or is the background funky? There's a strip right across the top, and on the right side of her face (our left) there's a border, like a hard brush stroke in PS that didn't get feathered in.
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